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Can You Have Me?, Just Touch My Mind!

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regards2you
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0 posted 02-22-2003 01:11 PM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for regards2you




Your phrases,
     raw or steamed,
  consumes the cliched
       components of my core.

Munching,
Quenching,
Chewing me,

with your,

Heart touching,
Soul searching,
Gut  wrenching.

And, I, stand by.

Admiring your ability to
   bump a bruise
        on my existence.

Yet, I'll walk away
my own person,
ever, a thank you for that.

Married to self,
     I am singly pleased
           allowing divorce,
~we are no longer ~us~

But, when you penetrate
     my aliveness,
where skull and scalp
          covers consciousness
of the ~god of me~,
     not the God I answer to,

but, the

~Goddess of my Essence~,

when your thoughts
     smear your soothing salve
          on my ~Mind~,
touching that most

precious part of ~who I am~,
then, I am,  eternally yours.

       Can you have me?

     ~Just Touch My Mind!~
.
.
.
.
.
.


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

© Copyright 2003 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
aries_luv_ppl
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1 posted 02-22-2003 01:19 PM       View Profile for aries_luv_ppl   Email aries_luv_ppl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit aries_luv_ppl's Home Page   View IP for aries_luv_ppl

I like your style. So unique. Vote in!

~Every girl has a dream within.

Enchantress
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2 posted 02-22-2003 01:20 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

OHMYGOSH!!  This is beautiful..
Are most certainly belongs in the book Pat.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 02-22-2003 01:24 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Oh Patricia, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may true love come and cradle your mind in lullaby of eternal promises! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this has my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 02-22-2003 01:24 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Pat, your poetry never disappoints me! It is full of pearls of wisdom and yet you still  manage to convey that through your eloquent "quillmanship"!

~ May your pen never dry up!

Warm hugs,
Linda
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5 posted 02-22-2003 05:41 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

This gets my vote for uniqueness. I LOVE it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Chanson
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6 posted 02-22-2003 06:35 PM       View Profile for Chanson   Email Chanson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chanson

Very lovely, regards! *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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7 posted 02-22-2003 08:23 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Well, look who I found here tonight....my friend, Pat.  (it's about time, Lady) I like it and so...*click*  my vote's in>..

Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-22-2003 08:24 PM).]

ellie LeJeune
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8 posted 02-22-2003 11:02 PM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

This is a deep and incredibly beautiful poem! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Martie
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9 posted 02-23-2003 12:05 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Pat...Strength and character in this uniquely you poem.  Enjoyed!
Duncan
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10 posted 02-23-2003 12:46 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

'And, I, stand by.

Admiring your ability to
   bump a bruise
        on my existence.'

Love that line!  
Bill Charles
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11 posted 02-23-2003 12:49 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

regards2you - what can I say, you're writings are suberb, a vote from me...

BC
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12 posted 02-23-2003 01:12 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This is really interesting.....the style...is very unique...and that is good!!!!

COOL!!!

Bridgette
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Yes Maam
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14 posted 02-23-2003 02:36 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

Pat, I love this,
soemtimes I wish we had a voiced section here, to hear the way people read their own poetry.. I'd like to hear you read this one!
Like the whole idea of this, trying to choose a favorite line, think its:
....your thoughts
     smear your soothing salve
          on my ~Mind~,
touching that most

precious part of ~who I am~,

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Sudhir Iyer
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15 posted 02-23-2003 03:24 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

beautifully written...

regards,
sudhir
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16 posted 02-23-2003 05:50 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

Duncan just picked up my favourite lines..
regards2you
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17 posted 02-23-2003 11:12 AM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you


I am surprised at the response here and pleased that all of you took the time to read and reply and vote, whoa...that's wonderful!

This does happen to be a favorite of mine and it makes me happy to know others have found something within that they, too enjoy....

To Aries, NancyLee, Noah, Linda, The Loner, Chanson, Ethel, Ellie, Martie, Duncan, Bill, Justblue, Dennis, ALyssa, Sudhir, Kaile......

Appreciate all of you taking your time to read and reply and vote. Thank you so much. Smiling here.....

I wasn't going to submit a poet for most poets here, are so much more skilled than I, and mine always seem to be a work in progress. Whether my poem makes it into the book, or not,  I'll be just as happy to have a book with my favorite poets and their best poems.

I thank Janet Marie for suggesting I submit poetry, too. This is a fun experience and hope to find  several hours today to spend reading this board.

The best of the best. what a treat!

Again, I thank each one of you for your generous replies.  
      
Love and hugs,  Pat

  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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18 posted 02-23-2003 06:44 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

"Admiring your ability to
   bump a bruise
        on my existence."
What a powerful line! Yes, click to submit. Well done!
Elizabeth Santos
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19 posted 02-23-2003 06:53 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Misdnightsun just said what I was about to say, an excellent line indeed, an interesting poem, You wrote the topic very well.
You are to be commended on this one
Liz
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20 posted 02-23-2003 07:15 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

I think this is wonderful, and would be a fine addition to the book.

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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21 posted 02-24-2003 04:43 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Your phrases,
     raw or steamed,
  consumes the cliched
       components of my core.

=====================================
And, I, stand by.

Admiring your ability to
   bump a bruise
        on my existence.
======================================


well those are just two of the coolest verses I will read today...
I love those analogies.
Very well done poetess Pat, this is a perfect choice to reflect your writing in the book, perfect theme!!

oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ...
oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang
;)

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22 posted 02-25-2003 09:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Indeed!
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23 posted 02-26-2003 08:01 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Fantastic! Well said.
Sandra
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24 posted 03-02-2003 03:58 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Unique indeed. Voting now.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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