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Mysteria
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25 posted 03-08-2003 05:53 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I liked your poem and your attitude and you get my vote on both counts.  When we write it has to be for ourselves first and foremost, and the rest is gravy.   Good Luck.

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

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26 posted 03-08-2003 05:55 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Sorry catching up here, and this was way cool -

Admiring your ability to
   bump a bruise
        on my existence

you get my vote Pat!

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

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Unique, and worth a vote
  
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28 posted 03-09-2003 08:50 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Yes -- going in. Tried to vote for this one before, but dunno if my vote talled....
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29 posted 03-19-2003 10:23 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Yes..I like this one too. Voting now.
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30 posted 03-20-2003 02:50 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I would have tremendous difficulty picking a favorite part... it's all excellent. *S*
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31 posted 03-20-2003 03:30 PM       View Profile for KristieSue   Email KristieSue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KristieSue's Home Page   View IP for KristieSue

I like this...unique says it!  I'll vote just for your bravery to post.  I disagree that you aren't a wonderful poet!  Keep it up!

KS
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32 posted 03-21-2003 07:51 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

very nicely done... I enjoyed...
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33 posted 03-21-2003 08:18 AM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you


Just to say thank you once more for all the replies.

It tickles me when ~my favorite poets~ reply to my poetry...as well as those whom I've not met through their poetry.

Very nicely done was achieved by the patient help of one of the best...
sometimes an inspiration for many of my poems.


Forever grateful,  Hugs, Pat  




..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (03-21-2003 10:54 AM).]

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yes... I have read this several times now..and am now..finally going to at least let you know I did   

well done ...

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35 posted 03-27-2003 11:25 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Here's a little bump.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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36 posted 03-27-2003 11:34 PM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you


Cpat/Ron,

Okay...glad you read it and let me know you did. Guess you mean the very nicely done comment by me.    

Larry,

Thanks so much for the bump. What a sweet thing to do. Smiles here.

Hugs to you both, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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37 posted 04-03-2003 01:29 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Very touching. I loved it.

Susan
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39 posted 07-12-2003 06:49 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Pat~
Do you have any idea how big I'm smiling just knowing you'll be in this book ?????

The very thought of it just *tickles me to pieces*~
Just think ... for all of time to be tucked in the pages with such wonderful poets and friends ... doesn't it just do your heart GOOD to know that the circle widens to touch other hearts ~:hearts:

Beautifully done, sweet poetess~
You DESERVE to be here for sure !!!
Love ya'
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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40 posted 05-06-2004 12:49 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

beautiful!
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41 posted 08-21-2005 01:58 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MyFriend~
You might not be here ... but you are certainly not forgotten, for you left a legacy of poetic footprints for us all to follow ... leading straight to your heart ... or is that your mind?~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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