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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Listen; do you hear it not? Fast beating heart with fluid hot? 'Tis at your presence that such is so; A gentle kiss would staunch the flow. Beads of sweat bead on my brow As you whisper soft and low And place a kiss upon my lips, Gentle hands upon my hips. Down are drawn we to the floor Whilst our spirits rise and soar. Deeper sink we into bliss With shorter pause between each kiss. My mind races with fevered thought; I found the one for which I sought. I gasp for mighty draughts of air, As you nibble on my ear. I slip my arms about your waist; Never a moment do we waste. Your nails trace furrows down my back, And I lose myself in eyes so black. What is that annoying sound? I float away and look around. The plastic beast has worked its charm; I smash the cold and vile alarm. Things are never as they seem, But I miss the Lady of my dreams. I ready myself for another day And go about my lonely way. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Alastair, I'm so happy you've joined in, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your missing and yearning but I know love will always find your way, it just takes a little patience and faith! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alastair, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Fantastic writing Ali~ ...  Regards, Sudhir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank goodness that you're incurable... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-21-2003 11:09 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I love this!! Great choice for the book! ~hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sorta like Dorothy Parker in the way its humor tinged with bitterness and waiting. So voting for this. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, persnickety one! *S* And those alarm clocks should be banned! *G* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Well, hey there, stranger! Great to see you here.  You really should share your poetry more often, ya know? Love this one. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yesssssss like it a lot Charisma |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Dreams can be so beautiful and so vivid, can't they? I loved this one.. I miss you!!! Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This hopeless romantic had to vote for this incurably romantic poem...  Ethel |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great poem Ali! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Let's get back to that dream ok? I love this Ali. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great dream Alicat, and poem! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just change this to "Man of my dreams" "Things are never as they seem, But I miss the Lady of my dreams. I ready myself for another day And go about my lonely way." and it fits me perfectly. M |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
How can I not vote for this? You're one of the true writers, m'friend. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Down are drawn we to the floor Whilst our spirits rise and soar. Deeper sink we into bliss With shorter pause between each kiss." like this...lots!! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'd hate to be your pillow, 'cat!! We all have those dreams, I think...or at least those hopes... Voting here, boss! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A terrific poem and dream voting! Maree |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
An excellent contribution to the book. Much enjoyed .  Lyra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Everytime I read you? I hear you now... good to see ya again, bro.... *vote*  |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Tehehee: You really seem to know how to life OUR spirits and then drop them like bombs, don't you! You're great at taking the reader for a ride and then shoving him out the car door when he least expects it! I give this a vote for sure, and passage into my library! "If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhhh ... and what a beautiful dream this is Alicat! Very much enjoyed the lovely sentiments and delicate twist of fantasy. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
What a wonderful dream Alicat......NICE ONE!!!!! Bridgette |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lucky is she who is the subject of your dreams...An extremely romantic write! ~ May your dreams become your reality... Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My oh my now every once in a long time a romantic poem comes along I don't go "oh mush!", and this is one of those times, this is done with such perfection and class, and certainly is deserving of gracing the pages of the book at the very least. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
You are not alone in the incurable romantics asylum! So many lovely people here, mostly poets though! I love this poem and the dreams ...wish realty would give a bite! Truly classic poetry...Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sorry to say, have not read you before this. I liked what Fractal had to say and agree. Enjoyed greatly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Well writen, Alicat - If Toerag had written this, I would say something now about sheep and stuff. But alas, you've claimed this prize, not him. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
The cat is back and he's rocking and certainly gets my vote...where ya been guy? Nice to see you sneak in here |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes... A Passionate publication wouldn't be the same without a persnikitty submission...  |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Nice ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
I don't think that I would like to read a book without a piece by you in it. I would like to thank you for sharing this piece and I think that I'm going to save it. Wonderful job my friend. Take care Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
masterpeice material, of course. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Alicat...This flows so smooooooth. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Like this piece. Much Ed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Alicat - nice write, enjoyed the read, and a vote I make... BC |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
I like this so giving it a vote and a push back up to the top. Love reading all these great writes. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
And away we go to the top again. Joyce |
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