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El_Campeador
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25 posted 02-22-2003 08:23 AM       View Profile for El_Campeador   Email El_Campeador   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit El_Campeador's Home Page   View IP for El_Campeador

Another beautiful poem, Janet Marie! You have my vote!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Kit McCallum
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26 posted 02-22-2003 08:38 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Just beautiful JM ... wonderful imagery.

Best wishes and hgus,
/Kit
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Janet Marie,

There are so 'many' fabulous lines in this, without quoting them all, this is one of my favorites:

"Autumn's auburn arrival comes in on crimson caress"

Beautiful poetry and sentiment. Love it!

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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28 posted 02-22-2003 01:35 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

This is poetry in motion. Breath-taking in its splendor---poetically and pictorally.
The beauty of it all has near moved me to tears...truly.

~ May your life flow gently with the ebb and
flow of the tides and the seasons...

Warm hugs,
Linda
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just out of reach


29 posted 02-22-2003 01:38 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Beautiful !! It has my vote. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

aries_luv_ppl
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30 posted 02-22-2003 01:39 PM       View Profile for aries_luv_ppl   Email aries_luv_ppl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit aries_luv_ppl's Home Page   View IP for aries_luv_ppl

This is SO beautiful!

~Every girl has a dream within.

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31 posted 02-22-2003 07:16 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Janet, worderful write for the book.
Never leave that beach.

Parker
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32 posted 02-22-2003 07:37 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

lovely words, jm
I guess some of us are lucky to live closer to the Atlantic Ocean.
*s
M
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33 posted 02-23-2003 09:14 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

thank you everyone for your lovely responses and support of my work, I appreciate it so much.
thank again to all who stopped in
jm

oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ...
oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang
;)

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34 posted 02-23-2003 02:34 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Lord love a duck how on earth did this get by me, must need new glasses again.  So where is VA is that Virginia?  Nah, there is no ocean there is there?  LOL, can you tell I failed geography?  I have an ocean and I insist you see it, you hear me, I insist you come here and see it!  This year too.  Now I am off to the voting booth.

               
~* Carpe' Diem *~  




[This message has been edited by Mysteria (02-23-2003 02:35 PM).]

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35 posted 02-23-2003 03:14 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

A beautiful post.  Joyce
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36 posted 02-24-2003 12:13 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Thank you to all for your replies and votes,
your support of my work is greatly appreciated.




Try as they might, the musk and smoky smells
of this season are simply no match for the
dusky scent of wet sand and surf.


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37 posted 02-24-2003 12:25 AM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Janet Marie:  This provides wonderful atmosphere and emotions.  I love it! Of course, I'm voting for it too.

Betty Lou Hebert

Nan
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38 posted 02-24-2003 07:52 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is indeed a "must read".. It has to be included... gotta be...
Chanson
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39 posted 02-24-2003 08:37 AM       View Profile for Chanson   Email Chanson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chanson

Janet, this is
beautiful! *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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40 posted 02-24-2003 09:37 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

This is beautiful, Janet.  There is so much stated in this poem about where your heart lies.
Jamie
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41 posted 02-24-2003 08:11 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Doesn't appear you need it butterfly lover--but another vote for this beauty must be cast.

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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42 posted 02-24-2003 08:29 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

No reason to list my favorite lines...I'd have to reprint the entire poem! You have talent in spades, Mizzou mama....my spam is YOUR spam...any day!
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The sand, the surf, the salty air, and those special memories of those special people...there's nothing like it on earth. You've captured it perfectly, Janet. Casting my vote!
Janet Marie
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44 posted 02-25-2003 12:16 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

thank you everyone for coming by...I think this one is gonna need all the votes I can get as I believe it may require 2 pages so I appreciate the support so much.

mothy hugs and love to poetry land

Where the touch of lovers end and the soul of friends begin,
there's a need to be separate and a need to be one ...
it's struggle neither wins.

EagleOne
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45 posted 02-26-2003 08:05 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Well ya already know I love this one. And I think there's still a few votes out there for this one too Janet , take care!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

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46 posted 02-26-2003 11:03 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

You certainly know how to pick 'em, JM.  This is one of your best, and probably the one of yours that lingered in my mind the longest after having read it.  This is just incredible writing, your technique and style are vibrant here... Reflections couldn't do without this in its pages.

Oh and before I forget... you gotta teach me emotional writing sometime, 'cause mine still sounds like it's written by a machine...

Talk to you later, groovy girl.

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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*drools* pretty pictures..lol sorry..breathtakingly gorgeous and fab words and all! *checks that lil box*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Munda
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48 posted 02-26-2003 04:58 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Another superb write JM.
Janet Marie
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49 posted 02-27-2003 12:04 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

thank you all for your kind words and support..I appreciate it much.

Where the touch of lovers end and the soul of friends begin,
there's a need to be separate and a need to be one ...
it's struggle neither wins.

 
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