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The Legend of Jenny Lee......last one for the book

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Honeybee
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50 posted 03-30-2003 12:42 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

All hail the master storyteller..this is a MUST for the book and to think that Im lucky enough to be your manager   You are a true poet m'friend, this is excellent

Melissa~
Justbleu
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51 posted 03-31-2003 04:21 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Bump.....I really like this!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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52 posted 03-31-2003 07:44 PM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you



Just love a happy ending! And all the rest of your poetry. How blessed we are you share it here.


Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Muys
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53 posted 04-01-2003 04:39 AM       View Profile for Muys   Email Muys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Muys

You are an astounding storyteller.
Muys
amigo
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54 posted 04-01-2003 02:15 PM       View Profile for amigo   Email amigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amigo

Simple yet a warm touch to the words you give, dear...gotta to be in the book...thanks for sharing...
Balladeer
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55 posted 04-01-2003 07:55 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Thank you all, my friends
Larry C
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56 posted 04-03-2003 11:29 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Can't let this slip away...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Bill Charles
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57 posted 04-04-2003 12:11 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Balladeer - only you can tell a tale like this, wonderful. My vote is cast...

BC
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58 posted 04-04-2003 09:08 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Dark Angel
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59 posted 04-04-2003 09:35 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Bump!
Charisma
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60 posted 04-06-2003 01:54 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

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61 posted 04-07-2003 02:47 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Upsy-daisy!!  
littlewing
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62 posted 04-07-2003 05:23 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Michael - I must say - this is the BEST tale I have read in a very long time and with style and grace - very well done - you had me at every line . . .   xxoo
Lady In White
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63 posted 04-07-2003 09:37 AM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White


Of course a third for the book...
Jamie
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64 posted 04-08-2003 01:49 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Always look forward to your grand tales 'deer.

J

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byron

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65 posted 04-08-2003 02:13 PM       View Profile for Street Heart   Email Street Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Street Heart

Michael,you never cease to amaze me.This is terrific and definitely needs to be in the book.I have to say,though "The Statue In Central Park" is my fav of yours,this one runs a very close second.Vote!

Peace,Geoffrey

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

Magicmystery
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66 posted 04-08-2003 02:38 PM       View Profile for Magicmystery   Email Magicmystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Magicmystery's Home Page   View IP for Magicmystery

I am in awe of how you hold a rhyme rythme and story so very well as this.
Your story was fantastic.... I was 17 before I was reunited with my "father".  I last remembered him when I was about 2 or three. Reunions are such happy occasions.  
You certainly have my vote...and I am adding this to my library too!

Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Justbleu
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67 posted 04-09-2003 12:50 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Bump.....

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

illusion
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68 posted 04-09-2003 01:12 PM       View Profile for illusion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for illusion

I'm glad I had the chance to vote for this.
Marge Tindal
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69 posted 04-09-2003 03:35 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal



And a 'yes' to go with it~
Lovely, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SPIRIT
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70 posted 04-10-2003 05:07 PM       View Profile for SPIRIT   Email SPIRIT   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SPIRIT

I know I can't vote again but I can bump back up. Would love to see this make the book, worthy of all the space it would take.
Paul Wilson
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71 posted 04-10-2003 08:08 PM       View Profile for Paul Wilson   Email Paul Wilson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Wilson

Michael... This has to be the cream of the crop. Wonderful story...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Balladeer
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72 posted 04-10-2003 09:13 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Once again, I thank you all, bumpers and voters alike...I appreciate (and am unworthy of) you all
Denise
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73 posted 04-10-2003 09:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Definitely should be included in the book! Fantastic piece, Michael!
Justbleu
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74 posted 04-10-2003 11:27 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I love this one....
Bump....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

 
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