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The Legend of Jenny Lee......last one for the book

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Munda
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25 posted 02-22-2003 12:12 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

A tale as only you can tell.
cupcake
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26 posted 02-22-2003 12:51 PM       View Profile for cupcake   Email cupcake   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for cupcake

WOW!!!!! That's all. WOW!!!!!!

I'm a reader - not a writer.

Nan
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27 posted 02-24-2003 01:39 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You're the MAN, m'Deer... This is awesome..
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


28 posted 02-24-2003 11:08 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

No one does it better.
kayjay
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29 posted 02-25-2003 11:45 AM       View Profile for kayjay   Email kayjay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kayjay

OH YESSSSSS!! Give me that western ballad every time.  You have an apt pip name sir!  Ken J

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

[This message has been edited by kayjay (02-25-2003 11:46 AM).]

jbouder
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Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash


30 posted 02-25-2003 05:19 PM       View Profile for jbouder   Email jbouder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jbouder

Michael:

This is an outstanding poem.  Considering the cast of characters, I still can't believe you pulled this one off as well as you did.  Excellent work.

Jim
Magnus
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31 posted 02-25-2003 05:40 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Mike ..  you truly are our "Balladeer"...

thanx.
Balladeer
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32 posted 02-25-2003 11:00 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Thank you, fellow poets. I love telling stories and am very happy that you enjoy reading them. Each comment of yours makes me beam....thank you!
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


33 posted 02-25-2003 11:28 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


What is this?...payback?  You're trying to sneak
one past ME now?  LOL  Love this, m'Deer.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Elizabeth Santos
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34 posted 02-26-2003 07:11 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Your poetry has the ability of pulling the reader into the position of a character and becoming part of him/her.
You are an amazing story teller and poet
It's a privilege to read your poems
Liz
Larry C
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35 posted 02-27-2003 12:34 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Yes sir Michael,
This was already in my collection. I absolutely love it. Here's my vote.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

KristieSue
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36 posted 02-27-2003 08:16 AM       View Profile for KristieSue   Email KristieSue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KristieSue's Home Page   View IP for KristieSue

Even if that's one last one for the book, I'd like to hear the rest of it...the rest of it in your mind....

Voting :-)

HUGGLES

KS
Marsha
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37 posted 03-04-2003 08:51 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

’Deer dearest heart, I’ve always said that when you write the world stands to listen. When you write as well as this and the story is told with such amazing clarity those who hear sigh with delight and envy. Delight because yet again you are the master story-teller, and envy because they know they will never even in their best days be as good as you. I’ve mentioned once or twice before you are truly an outstanding writer and always your work shrieks quality, if this gem weren’t included in the book then it would be a crime against poetry. You have my vote ‘Deer and I know that when the Mushettes get a chance they will come and vote too. Mummy will make sure of it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

Fred Hobbs
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38 posted 03-05-2003 03:39 PM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs

This is FOR the book?  This one IS a book Mike, and a fine one at that.  Got my vote.

fh
SPIRIT
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California Desert


39 posted 03-13-2003 09:11 PM       View Profile for SPIRIT   Email SPIRIT   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SPIRIT

Okay! So I can't vote again, just giving it a gentle bump to the top of the page. Love it!!!!!!
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon


40 posted 03-15-2003 12:35 PM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

I've read it several times now and it just gets better each time. It gets my vote.
Flower
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41 posted 03-15-2003 12:55 PM       View Profile for Flower   Email Flower   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Flower

This is unbelievable. Lovely!
Kethry
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42 posted 03-18-2003 09:27 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Even though I've read this before somewhere
I love it to pieces - so of course it has my vote. BTW next time you write about my life change the name willya!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


Jason Lyle
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With my darkling


43 posted 03-18-2003 10:32 PM       View Profile for Jason Lyle   Email Jason Lyle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jason Lyle

This is just awesome.
Jason
Lost Dreamer
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Normal, Illinois


44 posted 03-22-2003 01:10 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Wow, this was a very enjoyable read.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.


SimplyGold
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45 posted 03-22-2003 02:13 PM       View Profile for SimplyGold   Email SimplyGold   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SimplyGold

Well the Balladeer rides on into the sunset leaving us with eyes wide and in awe. Well done cowboy!

SG
Justbleu
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46 posted 03-26-2003 12:50 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Yee hah....let's get this here poem in gear.....

I enjoyed this too much for it to get lost!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

BSC
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47 posted 03-28-2003 10:19 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

I will never tire of your reading you 'deer ~ It is simply pure enjoyment ~ Bonnie
Pilgrimage
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48 posted 03-28-2003 11:12 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

I loved this! Absolutely loved it! It's right up there with the face on the barroom floor!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Krissy
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49 posted 03-29-2003 04:12 AM       View Profile for Krissy   Email Krissy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krissy

Deer this very very good indeed excellent writing, outstanding another one for the book I see I will really really vote for this one.
Very well written


love and warm stuff
as always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

 
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