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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-02-20 02:38 PM


   A Walk in The Sun  
  
Shallowing in a tropic sea
Gathering antiquity's birth
I dawdle in serenity.

The body warms in sundry rays
From whimsy's sip of mental mirth
A tea baptismal in the waves.

Absorbed in my temerity  
Left high and dry from neap's full worth
I steep in rare exotic tea.

Sacrosanct and minuscule.
With inquiries of a fool.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-02-20 02:39 PM



Hugs you!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-02-20 02:47 PM


Sunshine,
Hugs back and a

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-20 02:59 PM




(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love the ocean and you truly have us all soaking up the sun reading the glare of your words! (big hugggsssssss) So much for the afterhlow, now I really have to go to the beach, yay, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Chanson
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4 posted 2003-02-20 03:36 PM


But if we had all the answers,
what would be our excuse for
our foolishness? *L*

The search is far
more adventurous and colorful,
like your poem, Sy.

I enjoyed the stroll.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2003-02-20 03:39 PM


Eanjoyed this Seymour
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2003-02-20 04:00 PM


The body warms in sundry rays
From whimsy's sip of mental mirth
A tea baptismal in the waves.

Absorbed in my temerity  
Left high and dry from neap's full worth
I steep in rare exotic tea.

Sacrosanct and minuscule.
With inquiries of a fool.
==================================


Id walk with ya anywhere
and I dont even have to ask what kind of tea you speak of here...do I

"Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ...
We fell them down to turn them into paper that we may record our emptiness."

K.Gibran


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-02-20 07:02 PM


Noah,
Thank you for the time and read.

Chanson
Glad to have you on the stroll.

Dark Angel
Thank you for the read and reply.

JM,
And I would walk anywhere with you.
WWRS


suthern
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8 posted 2003-02-21 02:34 PM


Smiling here... even though the sun is just a fond memory. *S* I like this very much!
Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2003-02-21 02:36 PM


Exceptional work, my friend...

regards,
sudhir

Charisma
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10 posted 2003-02-21 04:25 PM


as beautiful as always

Charisma

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11 posted 2003-02-21 04:49 PM


very good, Seymour...
Kellie_Cantrell
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12 posted 2003-02-21 04:52 PM


awesome!!!
RSWells
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13 posted 2003-02-21 06:52 PM


A mellow write, and short for you. Taught me a new word...neap. Tint of reflection, a hue of subdue. Enjoyed
Enchantress
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14 posted 2003-02-21 07:50 PM


Love this Sy!
Hugs and a vote!!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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15 posted 2003-02-21 07:59 PM


I really, really enjoyed this one and can't believe you taught Richard a word he didn't know (he is a walking dictionary) good for you on both counts, loved it, now where is my pen to vote

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

nakdthoughts
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16 posted 2003-02-21 08:29 PM


Yes, I thought it was short for you, but no matter, it's always a treat to read your words.
hugs
M

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17 posted 2003-02-21 08:37 PM


Seymour - Wonderful & it gets my vote. hugs to you, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2003-02-21 08:52 PM


suthern
Thank you dear.

Sudhir,
Thank you my friend.

Charisma
Thank you so much.

garysgirl
Thank you dear.

Kellie,
awesome is good.

RSWells
Thank you this means allot.

Nancy,
Hugs back my dear.

Sharon,
Cute and a for you.

Maureen,
Hugs back.

Chris,
Hugs back and thank you.


fractal007
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19 posted 2003-02-21 09:10 PM


This is a beautiful poem.  I hope it gets into the book!

"If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"
-- Magus
"there is no good and evil, there are just sides."
-- Local Parasite

SEA
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with you
20 posted 2003-02-21 09:32 PM


"Shallowing in a tropic sea
Gathering antiquity's birth
I dawdle in serenity. "

Is everything you write beautiful?? I think so....

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2003-02-21 11:09 PM


fractal007
If you voted for it, it will, thank you.

Sea,
I hope so.

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22 posted 2003-02-24 01:14 AM


Wellllll...... I think I like your short poetry even better than the long! Thanks for this one!

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vlraynes
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23 posted 2003-02-24 01:17 AM



Absolutely...a heartfelt YES!
Love this, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Bill Charles
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24 posted 2003-02-24 01:17 AM


Seymour - wow, another winner...

BC

Nan
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25 posted 2003-02-24 07:32 AM


What fool would that be?.. Surely not you, Sy... This is lovely...
Elizabeth Santos
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26 posted 2003-02-24 07:38 AM


I don't know how you could chose from among the all the gems of poetry you have shared with us. I'm glad that wasn't my choice.
But anything you submit is prime material for the book. All of your work is magnificent
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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27 posted 2003-02-24 07:45 AM


Ratleader
You are kind thank you my friend.

Vicky,
Hugs and thank you.

Bill,
Thank you my friend.

Seymour Tabin
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28 posted 2003-02-24 07:49 AM


Nan,
From one lovely to another, LOL

Elizabeth,
Thank you love, you are ever in my dreams.

LngJhnAg
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29 posted 2003-02-24 10:41 AM


That's you, alright (except the part about being a fool).  Your style is uniquely you, Sy.
hoot_owl_rn
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30 posted 2003-02-24 10:50 AM


Hey...there's no sun here, it's snowing (again) I enjoyed the little respite you gave me, now send a bit of that snow this way!!

BTW...I'm still waiting here in PA for my proofs of your drawings of the lizards

Seymour Tabin
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31 posted 2003-02-24 11:14 AM


LngJhnAg
Thank you my good friend.

hoot,
Thank you sweet.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-24-2003 11:20 AM).]

SPIRIT
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32 posted 2003-03-13 11:25 PM


How on earth did I miss this beautiful write? Better late than never - my vote is cast.
Seymour Tabin
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33 posted 2003-03-14 07:38 AM


SPIRIT
That's the spirit, LOL

Justbleu
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34 posted 2003-04-10 11:23 PM


How did I miss one of your wondeful treasures Sy???  This is great!!!! I always enjoy your poetry!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Neeraja
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35 posted 2003-04-13 09:16 AM


I enjoyed this poem a lot!!!

Neeraja

Seymour Tabin
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36 posted 2003-04-13 03:21 PM


Bridgette,
Thank you so much.

Neeraja
Thank you for the read and enjoy.

Sunkissed
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37 posted 2003-04-13 06:01 PM


Definitely one to be read over & over.

you have my vote.

Sunkissed.

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