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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
THE MYSTICAL NIGHT Mummy has tucked me In my bed so tight, Told me she loves me And turned of the light. I must stay awake Until all are asleep. Then down the stairs I will softly creep. It is so shivery Getting out of the down, I slip on my slippers And pink dressing gown. Down to the back door Quietly turn the key Then into the garden The faeries to see. Good! I have arrived On the hall clock chime, This usually means I am right on time. The moon is so full The stars are so bright, I step joyfully, Into the mystical night. The fireflies lead me, My way they will show To the old elm tree By their brilliant glow. Then, in the magic Of a large faerie ring, We will dance and party And might even sing. At the centre of the ring Is the Bumblebee Band In black and gold stripe They all look so grand. Toadstools, all varied, Are the table and chairs, And small Pixie peddlers Peddle their wares. On each toadstool table Sits a small pansy plate A glow-worm lantern Adds a light that is great. I sip sweet nectar From a yellow buttercup And on golden honeycomb I stickily sup. A friendly witch, Gives rides on her broom, So much glorious fun In the sky - to zoom. Small gentle breezes Do caress the air And I am so happy To be here, not there. I am so very tired I should go back to bed The next thing I hear “Wake up! Wake up! Old sleepy-head”. I be me BUT who does me be? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this fairy tale. It was awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I just love this, sweet friend, I would love to do a solo with the Bumblebee Band, yay, and can I have one of those honeysuckle colodas with extra wheatgrass, yay! (kiss on cheek) I just love these fantasy poems of yours, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Das, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
who can resist fairies and the moon. lovely surreal writing and imagery. Well done Spirit!! " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I love the attention to detail in this poem. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
great flowing write, this one... much enjoyed... regards, sudhir |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I enjoyed the whimsy. *s |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I cannot express adequately how much I enjoy your poetry! You take me to the places where I like to go! Many of my earlier posts are about fairies, leprechauns, unicorns... worlds of enchanted forests where dreams come true. Thank you for the pleasure of reading your poetry! ~ May your imagination know no boundaries... Earth Angel |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
This is just so nice and sweet. My vote is in. I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a delight this is!! I thoroughly enjoyed! |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
delightful (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I felt like I was watching the fairies playing around...very good for the book, I think...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I do love this tale too. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (02-21-2003 08:32 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SPIRIT A delight to read. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I got caught up in the 'smile' of this.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
(Big Smiles) My goodness do you ever portray this little girl's character so very well here.... You really bring out the little child in us all with this poem. So charming!!! Gets my vote for sure. -Bob |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
These are the things of childhood dreams How well you remember' How delightfully you bring them back to us Liz |
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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
Childhood and dreams,wish it was always like that in our life. Thanks for taking me back. I loved it! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What a delightfully mystical story...  |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
How sweet this is. Love reading all these great writes. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very sweet story.  I Wish You The Luck Of The Irish [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-17-2003 04:48 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wasn't sure I had voted. A little bump anyways...LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done SPIRIT! Much enjoyed the tale of fairies and wonder. ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Spirit, This is wonderful, one that should be told far and wide. So very much enjoyed. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An Enjoyable Read, Spirit....  |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
A bump. I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
And another push to the top. |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
Bumping up my 'old mom'. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I am back again, this was beautiful the first time I read it. Then this time I saw more and more, Charming! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I like your spirit of "forever young". Enjoyed this poem very much. |
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