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dgvarner
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0 posted 02-19-2003 08:05 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for dgvarner

How long has it been that I have loved you
     Longer than the days
          we have touched...
In my heart you took root like a seed in the earth
In the depths of me you grew strong and bold...
My need for you fell desperate at times
My quest to find you was fervent...
Loving you took courage--
But I took faith
Believing you to one day stand before me...

You came to me in a quiet romance
Slowly seeping into my pores
Loving me gently, guiding me into you...
I've loved you forever
Even before the first time my smile met yours
Before the time I stayed just to be near you
Way before I shivered beneath your Angel touch...
I've loved you forever
Long before I knew it was you--
     It was you...
Now I know how it feels to be loved
          Completely...

-dgvarner
2-16-03
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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 02-19-2003 08:19 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, this is complete with so many lovely sentiments, I love it! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Duncan
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2 posted 02-19-2003 08:29 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

'How long has it been that I have loved you
     Longer than the days
          we have touched...'

Excellent write...and choice.     
Justbleu
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3 posted 02-19-2003 08:49 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Yes, that feeling of that ONE always with you throughout time!!!  I can relate to this!!!! Wonderful piece!!!!

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4 posted 02-19-2003 10:06 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"I've loved you forever
Long before I knew it was you--
     It was you..."


yes this is so perfect
Poet deVine
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Oh..I want to feel this way!!! Good poem!
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


6 posted 02-20-2003 12:26 AM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


Well, you've gotta know that I LOVE this.
Made me smile inside and out.
Good to see something new from you.
Love ya,
~Me

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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7 posted 02-20-2003 04:03 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Oh boy I agree with Sharon, I too want to feel this way.  This was an awesome write, enjoyed very much.
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8 posted 02-20-2003 06:03 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

ah beautiful penned....enjoyed it a lot

Charisma
dgvarner
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9 posted 02-20-2003 06:59 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

Thanks all, for checkin' me out!!  Very good to be in the 'loop'..

hugs, g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

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10 posted 02-20-2003 07:56 AM       View Profile for El_Campeador   Email El_Campeador   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit El_Campeador's Home Page   View IP for El_Campeador

"I've loved you forever
Long before I knew it was you--
     It was you..."

I loved those lines! Good poem, you have my vote...



“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

[This message has been edited by El_Campeador (02-20-2003 07:56 AM).]

Chanson
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11 posted 02-20-2003 08:38 AM       View Profile for Chanson   Email Chanson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chanson

This is certainly
a touching love poem.
Someone should feel
extra special receiving
this. *s
Earth Angel
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12 posted 02-20-2003 08:43 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Sounds like you are one lucky woman---and he is one lucky man! You expressed this love for him so well that I actually got tingles up my spine! Simply beautiful!!!

~ May the flame of your love for one another burn brightly until the end of time!

Linda
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13 posted 02-20-2003 09:28 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

To be loved completely is all one can ever hope for
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14 posted 02-21-2003 06:48 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

Hi Gale,

it has been a long time huh?

Bravo for this piece...i couldn't stop grinning like a drunk bobcat after reading it...glad life's going on so well with you...

plus this reminds me of a favourite song "I Knew I loved you" (title correct?) by Savage Garden...

hope life's well
Sudhir Iyer
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15 posted 02-21-2003 08:17 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

great writing... excellent choice of words...

much enjoyed

regards,
sudhir
dgvarner
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16 posted 02-22-2003 12:06 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

ah my friend KAILE! that's a great song!!  

thank you KAILE & SUDHIR for stopping in to this little ditty of mine!  

  
hugs, g

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (02-22-2003 12:08 AM).]

Munda
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17 posted 02-22-2003 12:40 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Beautiful, beautiful poem.
aries_luv_ppl
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18 posted 02-22-2003 01:24 PM       View Profile for aries_luv_ppl   Email aries_luv_ppl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit aries_luv_ppl's Home Page   View IP for aries_luv_ppl

hey this is a perfect romance poem!

~Every girl has a dream within.

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19 posted 02-22-2003 03:38 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DG~
Stick your head out the window ....
Can you hear the *sighs* ?
Me .... yep !
Lovely gal ....~
Good to see you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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20 posted 02-22-2003 06:18 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

dgvarner
You could not say it any better. You have my voe.
Parker
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21 posted 02-22-2003 07:20 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

dg, great write, definitly great love poem for the book. A more truer write of a hearts twin flame I've never heard.

Parker
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22 posted 02-22-2003 07:41 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

gives me warm chills reading it, because I know how that feels.
Miss reading you.
hugsssss
M
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23 posted 02-22-2003 10:44 PM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Hi Gale; Long time since I've read your poetry. How incredibly beautiful this is! I only dream of such a love...and pray to know the realty of it...I am so happy for you! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

dgvarner
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24 posted 02-23-2003 08:48 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

EL_CAMPEADOR, CHANSON, EARTH ANGEL, HOOT_OWL_RN...seems I missed thanking you folks!!  Many thanks to you for your kind words   so glad you found it in your interest to read me!

MUNDA, ARIES_LUV_PPL, ELLIE, SEYMOUR..thank you whole bunches!  I really appreciate you reading!!

MISS MARGIE..I hear those sighs....LOL  thank you!

PARKER..so good to hear from you...funny thing, this is where we met the first time eh!  thank you for reading me my good friend...

NAKDTHOUGHTS..you know how that feels eh...feels pretty darned good, yes!  thank you for reading!

hugs! g
  

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