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dgvarner
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0 posted 2003-02-19 08:05 PM


How long has it been that I have loved you
     Longer than the days
          we have touched...
In my heart you took root like a seed in the earth
In the depths of me you grew strong and bold...
My need for you fell desperate at times
My quest to find you was fervent...
Loving you took courage--
But I took faith
Believing you to one day stand before me...

You came to me in a quiet romance
Slowly seeping into my pores
Loving me gently, guiding me into you...
I've loved you forever
Even before the first time my smile met yours
Before the time I stayed just to be near you
Way before I shivered beneath your Angel touch...
I've loved you forever
Long before I knew it was you--
     It was you...
Now I know how it feels to be loved
          Completely...

-dgvarner
2-16-03

© Copyright 2003 dgvarner - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-19 08:19 PM




(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, this is complete with so many lovely sentiments, I love it! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2003-02-19 08:29 PM


'How long has it been that I have loved you
     Longer than the days
          we have touched...'

Excellent write...and choice.     

Justbleu
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3 posted 2003-02-19 08:49 PM


Yes, that feeling of that ONE always with you throughout time!!!  I can relate to this!!!! Wonderful piece!!!!

Bridgette

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4 posted 2003-02-19 10:06 PM


"I've loved you forever
Long before I knew it was you--
     It was you..."


yes this is so perfect

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5 posted 2003-02-20 12:03 PM



Oh..I want to feel this way!!! Good poem!

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6 posted 2003-02-20 12:26 PM



Well, you've gotta know that I LOVE this.
Made me smile inside and out.
Good to see something new from you.
Love ya,
~Me

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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7 posted 2003-02-20 04:03 AM


Oh boy I agree with Sharon, I too want to feel this way.  This was an awesome write, enjoyed very much.
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8 posted 2003-02-20 06:03 AM


ah beautiful penned....enjoyed it a lot

Charisma

dgvarner
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9 posted 2003-02-20 06:59 AM


Thanks all, for checkin' me out!!  Very good to be in the 'loop'..

hugs, g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

El_Campeador
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10 posted 2003-02-20 07:56 AM


"I've loved you forever
Long before I knew it was you--
     It was you..."

I loved those lines! Good poem, you have my vote...



“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

[This message has been edited by El_Campeador (02-20-2003 07:56 AM).]

Chanson
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11 posted 2003-02-20 08:38 AM


This is certainly
a touching love poem.
Someone should feel
extra special receiving
this. *s

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12 posted 2003-02-20 08:43 AM


Sounds like you are one lucky woman---and he is one lucky man! You expressed this love for him so well that I actually got tingles up my spine! Simply beautiful!!!

~ May the flame of your love for one another burn brightly until the end of time!

Linda

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13 posted 2003-02-20 09:28 AM


To be loved completely is all one can ever hope for
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14 posted 2003-02-21 06:48 AM


Hi Gale,

it has been a long time huh?

Bravo for this piece...i couldn't stop grinning like a drunk bobcat after reading it...glad life's going on so well with you...

plus this reminds me of a favourite song "I Knew I loved you" (title correct?) by Savage Garden...

hope life's well

Sudhir Iyer
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15 posted 2003-02-21 08:17 AM


great writing... excellent choice of words...

much enjoyed

regards,
sudhir

dgvarner
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16 posted 2003-02-22 12:06 PM


ah my friend KAILE! that's a great song!!  

thank you KAILE & SUDHIR for stopping in to this little ditty of mine!  

  
hugs, g

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (02-22-2003 12:08 AM).]

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17 posted 2003-02-22 12:40 PM


Beautiful, beautiful poem.
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18 posted 2003-02-22 01:24 PM


hey this is a perfect romance poem!

~Every girl has a dream within.

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19 posted 2003-02-22 03:38 PM


DG~
Stick your head out the window ....
Can you hear the *sighs* ?
Me .... yep !
Lovely gal ....~
Good to see you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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20 posted 2003-02-22 06:18 PM


dgvarner
You could not say it any better. You have my voe.

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21 posted 2003-02-22 07:20 PM


dg, great write, definitly great love poem for the book. A more truer write of a hearts twin flame I've never heard.

Parker

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22 posted 2003-02-22 07:41 PM


gives me warm chills reading it, because I know how that feels.
Miss reading you.
hugsssss
M

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23 posted 2003-02-22 10:44 PM


Hi Gale; Long time since I've read your poetry. How incredibly beautiful this is! I only dream of such a love...and pray to know the realty of it...I am so happy for you! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

dgvarner
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24 posted 2003-02-23 08:48 AM


EL_CAMPEADOR, CHANSON, EARTH ANGEL, HOOT_OWL_RN...seems I missed thanking you folks!!  Many thanks to you for your kind words   so glad you found it in your interest to read me!

MUNDA, ARIES_LUV_PPL, ELLIE, SEYMOUR..thank you whole bunches!  I really appreciate you reading!!

MISS MARGIE..I hear those sighs....LOL  thank you!

PARKER..so good to hear from you...funny thing, this is where we met the first time eh!  thank you for reading me my good friend...

NAKDTHOUGHTS..you know how that feels eh...feels pretty darned good, yes!  thank you for reading!

hugs! g
  

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

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25 posted 2003-02-24 12:38 PM


g,
Life as it should be for all of us. Nice write. You have my vote.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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26 posted 2003-02-24 12:57 PM


dgvarner - lovely love poem from your heart. My vote for this...

BC

dgvarner
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27 posted 2003-02-24 07:09 AM


LARRY & BILL..I thank you! Glad you enjoyed

hugs, g

Nan
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28 posted 2003-02-24 07:49 AM


Perfect... Completely - Perfect...
LngJhnAg
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29 posted 2003-02-24 10:44 AM


Gale, now this is a love poem.  I love the way you describe your feelings of love.  Beautiful.
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30 posted 2003-02-24 12:45 PM


This is delightful. Cause to celebrate.



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31 posted 2003-02-27 03:58 PM


Definitely worth waiting for. *S* I like this very much! *S*
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32 posted 2003-02-27 07:06 PM


loved it
EagleOne
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33 posted 2003-02-28 03:15 AM


"Now I know how it feels to be loved
          Completely..."

What can I say? I Loved it! Take care!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

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34 posted 2003-02-28 06:08 PM


Say bump-what ????

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

dgvarner
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35 posted 2003-03-01 12:09 PM


NAN, LNGJOHNAG, SPIRIT, SUTHERN, VANDANA, EDDIE..
I'm so excited you like me!     thanks so much for reading - glad you enjoyed!  Love is a grand thing!!
MARGIE!  thanks for the bump!

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

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36 posted 2003-03-02 09:31 AM


OH!!  This is so beautiful!
~Hugs and a vote!~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

vandana
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37 posted 2003-03-02 09:54 AM


enjoyed

dgvarner
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38 posted 2003-03-27 06:25 PM


ENCHANTRESS..thanks!  

VANDANA..glad you enjoyed!  

hugs, g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

pjtalty
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39 posted 2003-04-30 01:44 AM


It's always a warm, deep feeling to read a poem that paints word pictures so vividly, evocatively and with such elegant originality that it puts the reader in the picture. This is one such poem. Apparently the voting has been completed, so I'll pop it straight into my library for many re-reads.
P.S> I think that the theme of my poem *Predestined Love* would resonate with you.

Patrick Talty

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