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Parker
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... the old black rum


25 posted 02-19-2003 08:01 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Browneyes, Its so nice to see your work. I loved this one alot. I felt you talking to the sky in the eyes of one who may hold your breath and it all lead perfectly up to those perfect last lines.

So now all you have to do is see the ocean from a hidden cove.... like maybe on a sailboat..

Parker

this goes to the book.
regards2you
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26 posted 02-19-2003 08:27 PM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you



Janet Marie,

Was so glad to see this posted here.
It is brilliant, heart touching,..... actually, it is just plain perfect.

I love rereading it, over and over.

So enjoy,
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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27 posted 02-19-2003 08:48 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Jant Marie, I also think that it's about time you put one in here, and I love your choice for submission, too. I loved this one in Open and I love it here, so.... ......in there you go, I hope....   

Hugs,
Ethel
Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


28 posted 02-19-2003 09:49 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

sweet butterfly....you are so priceless!!!   as is every words that flows from your pen.....voted yes....for this yes....for you ALWAYS!!!
Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn


29 posted 02-19-2003 10:56 PM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

I remember this one...It harkens to my Chesapeake.


And so? Love it.

Ed
Joyce Johnson
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30 posted 02-20-2003 12:56 AM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

So glad to vote for this beautiful poem.  Joyce
Kit McCallum
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31 posted 02-20-2003 06:54 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wonderful!  A perfect choice for submission, JM. Love ya gator-gal!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Sudhir Iyer
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32 posted 02-20-2003 07:48 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Janet,

A brilliant choice from a brilliant poetess...

Regards to you O Brilliant one,
Sudhir
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


33 posted 02-20-2003 09:00 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Earth Angel is flying high with this one! Absolutely stunning on all levels! Kudos!

God is working his magic through you, Dear One!

Big, warm appreciative hugs!

Linda
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34 posted 02-20-2003 09:14 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ah...I think you've included everything but the oatmeal
Janet Marie
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35 posted 02-20-2003 10:21 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

THANK YOU to everyone for your generosity and support. I know this one was just posted, but its very special to me for the promises kept that inspired it and I very much wanted it to be the one to reflect my poetry in the book. Thank you for helping to make that possible.

my love and respect to poetry land.
jm

" ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ...
if it finds you worthy ...  it then directs your course."

K.Gibran

Seymour Tabin
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36 posted 02-20-2003 01:40 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

JM,
This words have pierced this heart and Randies too.
Joyce Johnson
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37 posted 02-20-2003 01:47 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

I cast my vote for this beautiful piece.  Joyce
RSWells
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38 posted 02-20-2003 04:51 PM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

A leg clinging soliloquy which answered some of it's own questions. Needs read a few times to appreciate (most good poetry does)
Duncan
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39 posted 02-20-2003 05:48 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

I'm not late...just don't like crowds!  

(Think if we chant this, over and over...summer will return?)
Larry C
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40 posted 02-20-2003 07:58 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

JM,
Well now, I've never seen blue so intense! It doesn't get better than this. Gotta go vote.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Lighthousebob
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41 posted 02-20-2003 08:47 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

Most exquisite expression here. So many heart pounding lines of expressed love's submission.  So many pressing questions and images here that I am just left awe struck. The graphic at the end was even beautiful and just put the perfect finishing touch on your Prose/ Poem/ Masterpiece. I have never read so much into the word "blue" before. On and on and on I could go.... Wonderful!!!!

-Bob
Janet Marie
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42 posted 02-21-2003 12:08 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

THANKS again to everyone for your support and your generosity of spirit.
I appreciate you all.
thank you
jm
aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind


43 posted 02-22-2003 03:24 PM       View Profile for aries_luv_ppl   Email aries_luv_ppl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit aries_luv_ppl's Home Page   View IP for aries_luv_ppl

this take away my breath!

~Every girl has a dream within.

Janet Marie
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44 posted 02-23-2003 09:15 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

thank you everyone for your lovely responses and support of my work, I appreciate it so much.
thank again to all who stopped in to read and reply
jm

oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ...
oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang
;)

Nan
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45 posted 02-26-2003 07:31 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

The blue hues of you surely belong within the pages of Reflections...
Local Parasite
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46 posted 02-26-2003 10:57 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

A treat to read this again, as I've read it so many times...

Here's a great big VOTE for my favourite nocturnal arthropod.  

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


47 posted 02-26-2003 04:38 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Janet Marie - you do write them well...

BC
Paul Wilson
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Between Fantasy and Reality


48 posted 02-26-2003 08:03 PM       View Profile for Paul Wilson   Email Paul Wilson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Wilson

Janet Marie~ Well done lady...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Janet Marie
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49 posted 02-26-2003 11:39 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

thank you everyone for your replies and support..this one is special to me.

Where the touch of lovers end and the soul of friends begin,
there's a need to be separate and a need to be one ...
it's struggle neither wins.

 
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