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suthern
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0 posted 2003-02-19 09:59 AM


At the top of a long list of things I am missing
Is that glorious pastime referred to as kissing!
Not a smooch on the cheek or a buss on the forehead
But a knock my socks off, drop me straight into his bed
Kind of meeting of lips - a mere soaring of souls
Fusion that completes me, makes me feel whole.
Such a fine occupation, for day or all night
The softest of kisses makes everything right,
Validates my existence, assures me my worth,
Pulls down the stars and makes heaven on earth.

Caress me hello, touch a tender goodbye
Fill me with longing, make me gently sigh
Help me welcome the morning, keep me smiling all day
Place me in your debt - you know I’ll gladly pay!
Make my toes curl, send my heart palpitating
And I’ll find you perfect, always fascinating.
I long to hear stories of how much you miss me
But all that can wait - Come here and kiss me!


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2003-02-19 10:06 AM


Hey...I know...a kissing booth...
for each smooch...ya get a vote
No? Ok...I'll vote anyway LOL
It wouldnt be a pips book with out Ruth rhymes

" ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ...
if it finds you worthy ...  it then directs your course."

K.Gibran


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2 posted 2003-02-19 10:10 AM


I believe in Pucker Power - and I love this as your submission... Love it...
Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2003-02-19 10:27 AM


*smiling* with a

regards,
sudhir

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4 posted 2003-02-19 10:28 AM


Oh, my! Our southern belle is also a passion flower! You were so convincing, I almost found myself puckering up to plant one on you!---the operative word was "ALMOST"!!! tehe  I loved this plea for a buss supreme!
Deliciously delightful!

~ Sending you lots of warm hugs and "angel" kisses...

EA

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(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous poem of poetic lipstick that just has to be in the new book, yay! (kiss on cheek) I send Putto's Kisses and angel hugs your way, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-02-19 11:15 AM


woweee

*going off to find someone to create all that pucker power with* *EG*

awesome job suthern!

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7 posted 2003-02-19 11:18 AM



Now I agree with that, a kissing booth...and who wracks up the most, is in love!  LOL...

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8 posted 2003-02-19 12:21 PM


"Caress me hello, touch a tender goodbye
Fill me with longing, make me gently sigh
Help me welcome the morning, keep me smiling all day
Place me in your debt - you know I’ll gladly pay!
Make my toes curl, send my heart palpitating
And I’ll find you perfect, always fascinating.
I long to hear stories of how much you miss me
But all that can wait - Come here and kiss me!"


ohhh excellent!

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9 posted 2003-02-19 02:07 PM


I couldn't have said
that any better.
Straight and to the point!
*s

Andrew Scott
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10 posted 2003-02-19 02:11 PM


What a GREAT piece.  Made me smile!  Thanks for the feeling.  With vote in hand, I submit and blow you an Internet kiss.
vlraynes
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11 posted 2003-02-19 02:14 PM



Oh yeah...lovin' this one.
Got me smilin' today.  


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you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (02-19-2003 02:15 PM).]

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12 posted 2003-02-19 02:16 PM


I know of watermelon kisses, and butterfly kisses, I even know of puppy dog kisses but this should be gob smacked kisses, for that is how it left me with wonder.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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13 posted 2003-02-19 04:05 PM


well hello there, I love kisses.

Charisma


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14 posted 2003-02-19 04:05 PM


Love the humor, and the searching message.
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JM: Can I put TOE in that booth??? The women would be lining up for miles to smooch him. *G* Of course... I'd be knocking them aside with my baseball bat... maybe not a good way to get votes, ya think? LOL Thank you! *S*

Nan: I believe in it... it just keeps avoiding me! LOL Thank you! *S*

Sudhir: Glad it gave you a smile. Thank you!

EA: Let's just leave that at ALMOST... with a few hugs and angel kisses!!! ROFL... I'm so glad you liked it... Thank you!!!

M'Toe: Poetic lipstick... what a delightful description! *S* Thank you!

KS: Good luck... and thank you!

Sunshine: I'd be stuffing the ballot fershure! LOL Thank you!

SEA: I appreciate that excellent very much... thank you! *S*

Chanson: Thank you very much!

Sir Andrew: I'll catch your kiss and cherish it... Thank you! *S*

vlraynes: Smiling's good... glad I helped! *S* Thank you! *S*

Kethry: ROFL... I don't know gob smacked kisses... but they sound like fun. *S* Thank you, dear friend. *S*

Charisma: Don't we all? *sigh* Thank you! *S*

bsquirrel: Thank you very much! *S*



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16 posted 2003-02-19 08:07 PM


Well, looky who I found here. I had to get off the computer for awhile....just can't get over this mess with my lungs or something, and I almost missed you. I don't like you back here on this page, so back to the top with you, friend.

Anyway, I've been looking for your submission, sweet Suthern Lady. This is a very good choice......and I sure do wish Gary was here right now.......HeeHee   LOL

Hugs
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-19-2003 08:07 PM).]

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WOW come here girl and let me hug you tight

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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19 posted 2003-02-19 08:24 PM


ah...the kiss, the kiss......  !!!  

wonderful!!

hugs, g

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20 posted 2003-02-19 08:36 PM


Oh yes...kissing....wonderful!!!  I'm voting now....yep sure am!!!!

Bridgette

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21 posted 2003-02-19 08:38 PM


I saw your title earlier today and thought I'd have to remember to come back to this...must say, I wasn't dissapointed.  Nice change of pace.  Like it a lot!
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22 posted 2003-02-19 08:47 PM


Forget Toe...he has turtle lips! You need a real man....one who can suck a hard-boiled egg through a straw!!

The SUnshine State is calling.....

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23 posted 2003-02-19 09:39 PM



I love this. Everything Sea quoted, and this just makes me smile. Voting.

Hugs, Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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24 posted 2003-02-19 10:57 PM


Oh you!  This was simply wonderful and if I could vote 100 times I would.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

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25 posted 2003-02-20 07:16 AM


Oh Suthern!  You had me smiling all the way through this wonderfully rhythmic ode to a kiss. Loved this!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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26 posted 2003-02-20 07:21 AM


Terrific! enjoyed this muchly

Maree.

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27 posted 2003-02-20 09:18 AM


This one deserves a vote if for nothing else but the smile it brought to my face
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28 posted 2003-02-20 04:07 PM


garysgirl: I bet Gary wishes the same! *G* Thank you so much! *S*

Martie: Thank you! *S*

Titia: Hugs are welcomed! *S* Thank you! *S*

dgvarner: That they are. *S* Thank you so much! *S*

Justbleu: I thank you very much... vote and comments are both appreciated! *S*

Duncan: I'm glad it was worth the return trip! *S* Thank you! *S*

Balladeer: Turtle lips? *G* Are those the ones that latch on and don't let go till it thunders? LOL If so... lemme at him and find me a storm free place! LOL Thank you... and watch out or I'll heed that call. *G*

regards2you: I know the purpose of all this is the voting... but my heart's doing such jumping jacks of delight from the comments, I don't think it'll matter that much if I don't make the book. *S* Thank you so much! *S*

Mysteria: You sweet lil ballot stuffer you... LOL Thank you so much! *S*

Kit: I love smiles almost as much as kisses... so I'm so glad you found smiles here. *S* Thank you very much! *S*

Dark Angel: I'm so glad you enjoyed... thank you! *S*

hoot: For you to read, enjoy, and find a smile is reward enough for me. *S* Thank you!

[This message has been edited by suthern (02-20-2003 04:07 PM).]

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29 posted 2003-02-20 05:08 PM


A lighthearted request. Enjoyed
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30 posted 2003-02-20 08:01 PM


Stars? Are you sure it was stars? It's hard to beat the pleasure of that kind of kiss. Fun and excellent write. Voting now.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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31 posted 2003-02-20 08:12 PM


OMG!!!  This is perfect for the book!
YES!!! Oh my..I just love it..
I'm off to find someone to kiss now!!!
~Hugs and a vote~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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32 posted 2003-02-20 09:38 PM


I am happy to vote for a happy poem--especially one by my suthern sis!

You left me with a smile on these lips...

muah--back atchya!

(oh what the hell? give 'em something to talk about I say!)


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33 posted 2003-02-20 09:49 PM


This is way more than great.  Joyce
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Stars? Are you sure it was stars? It's hard to beat the pleasure of that kind of kiss. Fun and excellent write. Voting now.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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35 posted 2003-02-21 12:51 PM


suthern - I've read your poetry for a while now, and finally I have the chance to vote for this one, click my finger goes...

BC

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36 posted 2003-02-21 01:11 AM


here's another vote...here's to continued good health, thanks to a natural cure...the kiss

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-21-2003 01:12 AM).]

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37 posted 2003-02-21 08:10 AM


Hi ya, Belle - I shoulda known you'd submit a poem about smooching - lol.

I was wondering: Have you ever submitted your poem about your mother and father, how they met, and what happened?  I always loved that poem.  It was so well written.

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RSWells: I'm very glad you enjoyed. *S* Thank you!

Larry: It is indeed hard to beat. *S* Thank you so much... twice! *G*

Enchantress: I hope you have better luck than I've had! LOL Thank you! *S*

serenity: That works for me! LOL They've gotta talk about someone... might as well be us! LOL So muah to you, too! *G* Thank you!

Joyce: And I way more than thank you. *S*

Bill: What a nice thing to say... thank you very much! *S*

ecrivan: It does make anything better, doesn't it? *S* Thank you very much! *S*

LJA: Well, those that can do... those that can't... write about it! LOL As for Two Halves of a Whole, I thought seriously about choosing it for my submission... in part because of your praise. *S* But I was afraid I wouldn't even get a short one in... much less that tome! *G* Thankie, sir! *S* It sure is good to see you round this place. *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (02-21-2003 09:09 AM).]

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39 posted 2003-02-21 11:09 AM


The softest of kisses makes everything right,

I loved this and feel the same about kisses. Perfect to bring a smile to any reader.

*s
M

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40 posted 2003-02-21 01:58 PM


SuthernGal~
I heard *laughter* coming from the submission site .... LOL @ 'SUBMISSION' ....

'a knock my socks off, drop me straight into his bed
Kind of meeting of lips'


I *submit* that it should be !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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41 posted 2003-02-21 06:45 PM


What a joyous poem!!! I think just the picker-upper or Pucker Upper (natural drug) that our fine new book could use.... Enjoyed reading very much.

-Bob

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42 posted 2003-02-22 08:41 AM


Love this!
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nakdthoughts: Thank you for the perfect response. *S*

Marge: Yup... leave it to me to cause a ruckus. LOL Thank you so much! *S*

Lighthouse Bob: Your response certainly picked me up... thank you very much! *S*

Munda: I'm so glad... thank you! *S*

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44 posted 2003-02-25 09:14 PM


Delightful entry, Ruth!
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Just 'pucking' up~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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46 posted 2003-02-26 07:59 PM


suthern~ Lovely thoughts...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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47 posted 2003-02-27 02:58 PM


Denise & Paul: I thank you both so very much! *S*

And Marge... smee-oooooooooooooch! *S*

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48 posted 2003-02-27 05:29 PM


Smiling here, as I remember someone from my past who used to speak of 'curled toes.'
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49 posted 2003-02-28 01:22 PM


As a definite fan of pucker power...this is perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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50 posted 2003-03-01 02:17 PM


This is so sweet. Thanks for sharing.
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51 posted 2003-03-03 12:00 PM


This is just the right amount of fun to add to the book. Great submission

                           Dawn

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52 posted 2003-03-04 12:55 PM


Midnitesun: Curled toes kisses are worth speaking of! LOL Thank you!

Sunnyone: Thank you so very much, fellow fan! *S*

Angel: I'm glad you liked... Thank you! *S*

DawnG: Thank you so much... glad you liked! *S*

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53 posted 2003-03-04 08:35 PM


Suthern beloved one do you know how special is your writing? Of course you don’t know that your words drift over my soul in a mist of delight. That your writing is excellent I’ve always known, it isn’t until I see it side by side others that I realise just how excellent. I don’t deny others can write and they write well, you however are one of a handful of writers who excel. If I didn’t know and love you I would have voted for this anyway, I don’t vote for it out of loyalty or love I vote because it is quite simply one of the best there is.

Oh and I love you to pieces darling heart, this is simply utterly utterly perfect


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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Mushy One: I apologize profusely for not thanking you sooner. *S* Your response is, as always, soothing to this suthern soul and pure delight. *S* I thank you so much!!!
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55 posted 2003-03-20 09:08 PM


A kissing booth? Hey, I like that idea.
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56 posted 2003-03-20 11:11 PM


Well it's already accepted into the book I see but I still want to say that I like this!
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57 posted 2003-03-26 10:02 AM


Smart Chick: It sure would brighten MY day! LOL Thank you very much! *S*

Red: I sincerely appreciate each and every vote. *S* But I also appreciate knowing someone likes what they've read, regardless of voting. *S* Thank you ever so much! *S*


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58 posted 2003-04-29 06:38 AM


This is a fine spun and refreshing piece of the poetic art which I enjoyed very much. It goes straight into my library and eventually, I trust, into the coming book.

Patrick Talty

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good to have this in the book!
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