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Nan
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25 posted 03-24-2003 07:17 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You've a multi-talented quill, h...
Susan Caldwell
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26 posted 03-24-2003 01:17 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Astonishingly beautiful message.

Susan
Larry C
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27 posted 03-27-2003 11:24 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

A bump for an awesome write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

regards2you
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28 posted 03-28-2003 08:41 AM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you


Helen,

So many wonderful poetic lines in this, hard to pick my favorite, but I found this touching, considering their age:

"Like she was his prized child"

Very talented, you are. Enjoyed greatly. This is very special and has my vote.

Hugs, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Larry C
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29 posted 04-03-2003 11:33 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

I'm not letting this keeper slip away. I love this piece...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


30 posted 04-05-2003 09:24 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Made me cry too,  for I could almost see you sitting there writing as fast as your pen would take you, absorbed in the conversation...not meant for you?

I don't know about that!  This is a lovely profile of your heart in prose and in poetry.

and yes, to be loved like that!!
Denise
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31 posted 04-05-2003 09:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

*tears* Fabulous piece of writing! Definitely one for the book!
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32 posted 04-05-2003 10:06 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I loved it then, and love it now. And? seems this time YOU cast the spell, and I'll just cast the vote!
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33 posted 04-05-2003 10:18 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Bookworthy without a doubt!
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34 posted 04-05-2003 11:51 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

In a soft whisper, yes. Such a rare love story.
Muys
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35 posted 04-06-2003 07:03 AM       View Profile for Muys   Email Muys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Muys

You have my vote
Muys
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


36 posted 04-06-2003 02:46 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I have lived a story like that..it just ended before its time...

M
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37 posted 04-06-2003 09:54 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Hello Helen

A wonderful yet sad story which had me mesmerised from beginning to end.  

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Larry C
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38 posted 04-07-2003 09:10 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

You can't go away yet...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

1slick_lady
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39 posted 04-07-2003 10:04 PM       View Profile for 1slick_lady   Email 1slick_lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit 1slick_lady's Home Page   View IP for 1slick_lady

larry...you are cracking me up but......i do adore you...h
Larry C
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40 posted 04-08-2003 01:00 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

helen,
You know, for you the moon. But frankly this is so awesome. Can you tell I like chick flicks? Book me...I'm a romantic!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

1slick_lady
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41 posted 04-08-2003 05:08 AM       View Profile for 1slick_lady   Email 1slick_lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit 1slick_lady's Home Page   View IP for 1slick_lady

cuffed and on your knees...now for your punishment...LOL ...helen
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42 posted 04-08-2003 03:08 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I am at a loss for words here. This is the best I've read of you, ever.
Larry C
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43 posted 04-09-2003 09:00 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Cool! One more round!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Amature2
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44 posted 04-10-2003 05:21 PM       View Profile for Amature2   Email Amature2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Amature2

1slick_lady, you had me glued from start to finish. You have my vote.
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45 posted 04-10-2003 05:30 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

OK, so now go sign your publishing agreement so this one can make it into the book too!
your fan club wants you in the book
aaron woodside
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46 posted 04-10-2003 05:37 PM       View Profile for aaron woodside   Email aaron woodside   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aaron woodside

I would have cried for me too.  

Very nice.  I hope it gets in.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

Larry C
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47 posted 04-10-2003 05:39 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Kacy,
Stop teasing...Ron has to accept this first!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


48 posted 04-10-2003 07:14 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

helen - never seen you write like this before, it's an amazing writing... Voted for this...

BC
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49 posted 04-11-2003 01:49 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

helen, i would love to see this one in the book but this won't even be considered unless you sign the Publisher's Agreement for your other poem A Lady's Lace first...was wondering whether you got the email from Ron?
 
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