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Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2003-02-18 11:11 PM

There is no darkness here
only the twilight of another day
softly spoken night words of love
are all you’re allowed to say.

Bring your heart into this quiet
and lay down upon my breast
breathe slowly and enjoy
the solitude of this rest.

Fret not about the morrow
it will be there when you wake
put yourself into my hands
you give and I will take.

Give me your harried worries
give me your day of stress
I’ll take your cares and stroke them,
soothe them with my caress.

In perfect harmony, we’ll sit
and wait til your soul is eased
then with your smile, I’ll know
that you have been well pleased

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-02-18 11:15 PM

This is so beautiful, Sharon..I love it.
I believe this is definitely one of my
favorites of yours.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Martie

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2 posted 2003-02-18 11:18 PM

A peaceful place you make within.

Larry C

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3 posted 2003-02-18 11:22 PM

PdV,
And such sweet support it is! Very nice. It touches my broken heart in a mending way. Thanks.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-02-18 11:25 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

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5 posted 2003-02-18 11:34 PM

(sigh) Oh Sharon, this is so very comforting, sweet friend, in your words there is always compassion and no darkness, here's angel hugs to you, a being of light, and my vote to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-02-18 11:58 PM

PDV....you don't grace us with your writing nearly enough, know that?

garysgirl

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7 posted 2003-02-19 12:00 PM

Sharon, This is absolutely beautiful....

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-19-2003 12:01 AM).]

Dark Angel
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8 posted 2003-02-19 12:02 PM

This flowed beautifully Sharon.

Love it!

Nan

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9 posted 2003-02-19 08:21 AM

This is a wonderful choice for submission, Sharon... I like it lots...

Lighthousebob
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10 posted 2003-02-19 11:14 AM

Such a peaceful and comforting spirit you invite here with your words. I would hope that your poem would be published if for subliminal purposes only. Wonderfully relaxing.

-Bob

ooops had to go back and check the box!!!

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (02-19-2003 11:16 AM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-02-19 11:19 AM

Now Devine one, you're making me choose, this one or that one...

aw heck with it, both of 'em!

Andrew Scott
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12 posted 2003-02-19 01:48 PM

Oh my, my... voting with passion. I bow to you and yours.

bsquirrel

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13 posted 2003-02-19 05:20 PM

I accept the offer.

Justbleu
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14 posted 2003-02-19 05:37 PM

Yep...ME LIKES THIS ONE!!!

Bridgette

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15 posted 2003-02-19 09:42 PM

sweet....and gentle
lovely
smiling

Joyce Johnson

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16 posted 2003-02-19 10:14 PM

I have to agree with the others. this is beautiful. Joyce

Balladeer

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17 posted 2003-02-19 10:21 PM

No book would be complete without DeVine inspiration!

Mysteria

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18 posted 2003-02-20 12:46 PM

I missed this one somehow and what a loss that would have been - excellent one for the book.

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

19 posted 2003-02-20 04:56 AM

What possibly could I add? "votes"
Jason

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

20 posted 2003-02-20 06:08 AM

beautifully as always Sharon...love it!!

Charisma

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Lost in thought

21 posted 2003-02-20 06:20 AM

I'm relaxed now, and calmed and comforted and *contented smile* this is good

Thank you, I need to relax a bit.
Alot of this reminded me of a mother and child.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Kit McCallum

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22 posted 2003-02-20 06:58 AM

Beautiful sentiments, Sharon ... soft and inspiring!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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23 posted 2003-02-20 08:04 PM

There is no darkness here
only the twilight of another day
softly spoken night words of love
are all you’re allowed to say.

Bring your heart into this quiet
and lay down upon my breast
breathe slowly and enjoy
the solitude of this rest.
=================================

sanctuary set to ryhme.... lovely sentiments Sharon... read aloud smooth as silk

"Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ...
We fell them down to turn them into paper that we may record our emptiness."

K.Gibran

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Canada eh.

24 posted 2003-02-20 08:08 PM

A perfect choice Sharon...very calming..much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

serenity blaze
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25 posted 2003-02-20 09:13 PM

You are so soothing...

I do wish I could hear you read this one, as I know how lovely your voice is too. hmmm....gonna have to see what I can do about that--

*click*

Duncan
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26 posted 2003-02-20 09:25 PM

'Fret not about the morrow
it will be there when you wake
put yourself into my hands
you give and I will take.'

Absolute calm...achieved. Excellent choice Sharon.

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

27 posted 2003-02-21 12:17 PM

This is one of my favorites too. Thank you for your kind comments.

angsana
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28 posted 2003-02-21 02:16 AM

So soothing, you've said you so gently and lovingly. Enjoyed!

angsana

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29 posted 2003-02-21 03:59 AM

Yep... Peaceful, serene and all associated descriptions fit the place in the heart of your work... and with exceptional flow...

really liked this one... thanks...

Regards,
Sudhir

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30 posted 2003-02-21 02:47 PM

This is beautiful, PDV... and left a gentle smile. *S*

Jamie
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Blue Heaven

31 posted 2003-02-21 04:48 PM

A place of comfort like this should definately be in.

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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the ass-end of space

32 posted 2003-02-21 11:11 PM

Sharon...sigh

WinterWren
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...Coming to

33 posted 2003-02-22 12:03 PM

A very calming sweet poem.
Enjoyed, you have my vote.

WinterWren
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aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind

34 posted 2003-02-22 12:06 PM

nice

~Every girl has a dream within.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

35 posted 2003-02-22 01:37 AM

Poet deVine - I have read many of your writings, and you do them well. This one is also well, and has my vote...

BC

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36 posted 2003-02-22 08:51 AM

Love it Sharon.

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37 posted 2003-02-22 08:59 AM

Nice pleasant write.

"If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"
-- Magus
"there is no good and evil, there are just sides."
-- Local Parasite

Paul Wilson

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38 posted 2003-02-26 08:06 PM

Touching Write...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

39 posted 2003-03-01 06:12 PM

This is just beautiful, Sharon. Hey, I have a few too many worries and extra stress. Can I send them to you, too?

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40 posted 2003-03-02 07:45 AM

Very nice Sharon
Muys

Muys
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41 posted 2003-03-02 07:48 AM

very nic Sharon.
Muys

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42 posted 2003-03-02 09:59 AM

enjoyed

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43 posted 2003-03-02 10:05 AM

To be cared for by such a loving person as yourself, would most assuredly be a blessing.
Your gentleness and caring ways are reflections of your truly loving nature.
Lovely poem--and sentiments...

~ May all the love that you radiate be returned to you tenfold...

EA

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