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mpt Junior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 32australia |
i lost a piece of my heart, that one day in march i left it behind, somewhere in a park where a child plays, and has a happy smile and sees his father, who knows his life was worthwhile he created a life, from the very thing of beings a miracle to me, or so it seems so easy to take away, so easy to make so hard to decide, when its a mistake i made my decision, she made hers it just so happens, our decisions concurred every day, it makes me sad that we took away the one, who could call me Dad |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Matt, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I know these feelings of yearning and missing ever so much and I send angel hugs to console and heal, this is very touching and every poem that can touch the heart is special, as your poem deserves my special vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a sad yet beautiful write. it gets my vote. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
OH how deeply sad this is....very honest piece....VERY GOOD!!!  Bridgette |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This certainly gave me a chill. It's a heartbreaking write. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is a hit hard and hit home kind of write and you also get my vote for nice work. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Sad indeed, nice write - gets my vote. I be me BUT who does me be? |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Heartbreaking poem. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, this one hits right to the very core. There is so much pain and expression in it. Gets my vote |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
The regret is crystal clear. Well done, mpt. When you think you have heard it all, |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
It touches me though I never experience something like this. You have my vote. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
Very touching. I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This tugged at my heart. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This poem about broke my heart. I hope your Mom found someone who could make her happy. Dawn |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
poignant, and the one capital letter makes it more So.....! nice touch..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a warm sad write... M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very heartfelt write. Enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Matt, Very raw write. You touched the depth of my heart and gut with this situation. Terribly sad. You captured how many ~feel~ who are either one of the two decision-makers, or the relatives.... tears here.... Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
mpt although the pain will never leave your heart, you've learned from your mistakes and can be there for others who are in the same shoes (or about to be) HUGGLES.... KS |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh goodness, this is a sad write. But I liked hearing it from the Father's side. You expressed it very well..... Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Heartfelt write!! Charisma |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good write...thank you! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Words worthy of our rapt attention... Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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poohbear19 Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 94Colorado, USA |
This is a very good poem. I have never known my dad so I can't write a poem about my dad and me unless it is saying how much i hate him. |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
This is a beautiful and gut wrenching piece of work. You need to get this piece out to the professionals in the literary field. Trust me on this one, I don't hand out praise lightly. |
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