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The Warmth Of Him

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Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


0 posted 02-18-2003 04:27 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Enchantress




~ The Warmth of Him  ~



And the warmth of him....                                                                    

bringing in the logs
     for the long cold winter
and making me tremble
     with the promise in his eyes
                               ... of later


walking barefoot through dark, silent woods
green fir trees..dark brown eyes
                                  shiny black braids
bride red feathers
                                  turquoise beads
smoky prayers
around a campfire..my fine white horse
swifter than the north wind!


                and the warmth of him


strong, handsome brave
           and favourite of the Sun god
soft hot breath against my breast
           lips murmuring
arms clinging, blood churning
          loins burning
while the rain beat gentle on the tent
          near the lake
and the pale Moon faded into dawn
at the moment when the wild birds cry


            and the warmth of him.
© Copyright 2003 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 02-18-2003 04:28 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

This is so beautiful I have to give it a vote.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


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Now, I would have definitely picked this one out as a keeper, had you let me...

wait, I already did!
arthur
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3 posted 02-18-2003 04:43 PM       View Profile for arthur   Email arthur   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for arthur

nice
arthur
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


4 posted 02-18-2003 04:43 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Nancy, even the title warms me up on this extremely cold day---mind you, it sounds like he might do a much better job of warming me up---I mean a much better job of warming YOU up! tehe

~ Keep the home fires burnin'
Linda
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Somewhere... out there...


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I love this one, Nancy.
It's beautiful.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

kayjay
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How can I not love this..You do this subliminal passion so well!!!  Hugs..and a vote.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Goodknight
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7 posted 02-18-2003 05:19 PM       View Profile for Goodknight   Email Goodknight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Goodknight

Great poem - great images - wonderful feelings - loved it - Paul
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The Shores of Alone


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Very warm, this gives a wonderfully passionate feeling. I want one just like him.
Sandra
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9 posted 02-18-2003 05:37 PM       View Profile for Logan   Email Logan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Logan

Ahh, Leigh girl, only you can put such magic in your words. Very lovely...very gentle smile
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Oh, goodness, Karilea, this is a very good
one that you picked for the book.
Very romantic....

Heart Hugs,
Ethel
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enjoyed
hoot_owl_rn
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Very romantic
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City of Roses


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(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, this made me smile and this is perfect for the new book, yay! (kiss on cheek) I knew you'd join in, hip-hip hooray, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

scorpio
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right...there


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Beautiful images and emotions blended in this poem,Enchantress...the sensuality of this write is stirring...it has my vote..

believe in what your heart feels...

*Stubby*
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Avery special warmth
very nice J *S*
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


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Good choice to submit. I really like this!!
Larry C
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Nancy Lee,
Finally, I found our common bond! Way cool. Gets my vote.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

SEA
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with you


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I love the feel of this
Janet Marie
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walking barefoot through dark, silent woods
green fir trees..dark brown eyes
                                  shiny black braids
bride red feathers
                                  turquoise beads
smoky prayers
around a campfire..my fine white horse
swifter than the north wind!


                and the warmth of him


strong, handsome brave
           and favourite of the Sun god
soft hot breath against my breast
           lips murmuring
arms clinging, blood churning
          loins burning
while the rain beat gentle on the tent
          near the lake
and the pale Moon faded into dawn
at the moment when the wild birds cry

===============================

exquisite imagery...so sensually stunning.
Now...how bout that one about his hands being butterflies

" ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ...
if it finds you worthy ...  it then directs your course."

K.Gibran

Dark Angel
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Oh Yes! Love it!

you have my vote!

Maree
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much enjoyed the 'adventure' here

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-19-2003 12:36 AM).]

Lighthousebob
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22 posted 02-19-2003 12:43 AM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

Exquisitely romantic and full of red blooded passion... Has a kind of close to nature feel to it that really adds to the mood I think. Enjoyed reading this poem very much and your poem gets a vote from me for sure. GOD bless.

-Bob
christian
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you know, roses are red
           violets are blue ..
           yata yatta yatta?

welll .. forget that, this knocks it out
of the way. totally!
christian
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voting. [sorry]
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