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Guardurthoughts
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0 posted 2003-02-18 03:52 AM



Hail to the queen mother of self proclaimed angels
who wears a mask to hide herself, to hide from the truth of the world

Bow to the almighty princess of crazy anthems
Who spews them out and infects others. If I Jump you jump,if I cut... would you?

Miss. Barbie Doll,Miss. Drama mama,Miss Country time
Who can’t handle life or words of truth
And wants only you for her, like ball and chain.


Was it wife or friend that I obtained?
Who is to blame nobody knows….
This contract is void
The ink has run,
And the signatures only splatter...
Welcome to the real world…….
Truth awaits you...ready or not.
___repost did a little re writing here and there thanks!

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~

"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

© Copyright 2003 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
winston
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since 2002-12-19
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NW of Eden
1 posted 2003-02-18 07:53 AM


Good read.

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-18 02:59 PM


Enjoyed this read very much

Cold hands means a warm heart

Local Parasite
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3 posted 2003-02-18 04:55 PM


This reminds me of someone I used to know.  I guess it's obvious why I say "used to know," but if it's not, oh well.  Glad I'm not married yet, this poem makes me want to wait even longer... heh...

Very nice writing.  The style is so unusual and eye-catching that I think it worthy of inclusion, and I'm voting.

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-18 07:28 PM




(big hugggssssssss) So sad but true, if only the real world wasn't all license and registration please, please sign there and add todays date philosophy! (sad sigh) You speak of the truth of these values so vividly, sweet friend, this has my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erica, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
5 posted 2003-02-18 07:36 PM


Ahhh, just the perfect amount of angst
and not tipping the over-emotional scale.
Excellent balance!

Love it. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-02-18 07:45 PM


Gadzooks! Them's hurtin' words! Sorry for your state of pain and disillusionment! So often people put their best foot forward while they are dating and then after they are married, their true colors come out--and that is not always a pretty sight!
You portrayed this scenario very well indeed!

Good luck!
EA

Justbleu
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7 posted 2003-02-20 09:26 AM


Enjoyed

Bridgette

bsquirrel
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8 posted 2003-02-20 02:11 PM


Savage and true. Excellent.
aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind
9 posted 2003-02-22 01:22 PM


enjoyed

~Every girl has a dream within.

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
10 posted 2003-03-17 10:34 AM


I agree with Mike, savage but needful I suppose. A good write.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2003-03-17 01:13 PM


Good write!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Flower
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since 2003-03-15
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12 posted 2003-03-17 01:15 PM


I enjoyed and I voted.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

garysgirl
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13 posted 2003-03-17 02:16 PM


Yes, a very good write, with a lot of emotions in it.
SPIRIT
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California Desert
14 posted 2003-03-17 02:21 PM


Very interesting piece of writing.
Kethry
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15 posted 2003-03-17 02:58 PM


Now you know whay a LITTLE knowledge is a dangerous thing.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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