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Poet deVine
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50 posted 03-15-2003 04:04 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Just checked to see if I'd read this yet. I guess so, but what's the harm in a bump?
rodger_jr
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51 posted 03-17-2003 09:26 PM       View Profile for rodger_jr   Email rodger_jr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rodger_jr

Ruth has read this one to me before, liked it then, like it now
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on the threshold of a dream


52 posted 03-21-2003 09:17 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

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53 posted 03-21-2003 09:38 AM       View Profile for KristieSue   Email KristieSue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KristieSue's Home Page   View IP for KristieSue

Just goes to show that everyone has their purpose...no matter what it is.  Granted, lost dreams are an entire different story...

great job...I'll vote.
rosepetals25
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54 posted 03-21-2003 10:21 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

I loved this one the first time I read and I think I love even more now   You have definately got my vote. How could we not have such talent in the book?

Tara


"wake me up inside
call my name and save me from the dark"
-Bring Me To Life by Evanescence

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-21-2003 10:22 PM).]

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55 posted 03-22-2003 12:58 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This is awesome, you always have a way of serving your poetry just right.



Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.


[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (03-22-2003 12:59 PM).]

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56 posted 03-22-2003 01:27 PM       View Profile for DawnG   Email DawnG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DawnG

Enjoyed.

               Dawn
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57 posted 03-22-2003 04:15 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

hugsss you......enjoy your words much!


Lauren~

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

garysgirl
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58 posted 03-24-2003 02:35 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Yep, I already read it.....and voted.....
but, just a quick  

Susan Caldwell
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59 posted 03-24-2003 02:42 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

I loved it.  

Susan
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60 posted 03-24-2003 06:04 PM       View Profile for Krissy   Email Krissy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krissy

Deer it is lovely and I love it.  Excellent writing and outstanding.
Very well written


love and warm stuff
as always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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61 posted 03-24-2003 10:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wish I could vote again!
Susan Caldwell
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62 posted 03-25-2003 12:18 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

You know, I never worked at McD's, does that mean I missed the cycle or just made my own?  I joined the Navy when I was 17. Before that I worked in food service, and officially got my bum pinched at the age of 14 by a man old enough to be my dad.  He tipped me $10.  I was happy....

Great write, I really enjoyed it.

Susan

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Joyce Johnson
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63 posted 03-25-2003 01:18 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

I know I already voted for this, so I had to look at the ratings to see why on earth it was not on the already accepted list.  I know I can't vote again but I wish I could.  I guess because it is a 2 page poem, but it is truly worth it.  Love, Joyce
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64 posted 03-25-2003 01:28 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Rest, Dear Friend, Rest.... Awesome writing there 'Deer.... This one definitely gets my vote.
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65 posted 03-25-2003 02:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Thank you for all of the awesome comments and heartfelt replies. I appreciate you...

Susan...ten bucks for a bum pinch? I'd be happy, too!!!
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66 posted 03-25-2003 02:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Stop that!!!

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (03-25-2003 02:42 PM).]

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67 posted 03-25-2003 02:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

good grief!!!! It's gone berzerk!!

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (03-25-2003 02:41 PM).]

Susan Caldwell
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68 posted 03-25-2003 03:24 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Oh but it is so worth more than $10 now!!

Skyfire
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69 posted 03-25-2003 03:34 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Wow. I love the way you intertwined both parts of the poem at the end you get my vote!
Larry C
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70 posted 03-27-2003 11:26 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Back to the top...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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71 posted 03-27-2003 11:29 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Why, thank you, LArry!!


Susan...I'll mortgage the house!!
waldopepper
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72 posted 03-27-2003 11:55 PM       View Profile for waldopepper   Email waldopepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for waldopepper

I give it two all-beef votes, with lettuce, pickles, tomatoes, onions, special sauce, on a sesame seed bun!  This is a grand cycle indeed!
kaile
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73 posted 03-29-2003 04:25 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

never worked at Macdonalds but worked at KFC for a while and remember those youthful dreams very well...how we will move on to better things, how the world is our oyster etc etc...

i guess i will tell you several decades later whether i have evolved to be the man as described in your poem..
Marilyn
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74 posted 05-13-2003 09:13 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Oh Mike. Another one for the Ballad King. Excellent job my dear friend.

Marilyn
 
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