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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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he sings the distance the suffering heart (burnished brass a quivering cry) in mute smoke rings rising to join the empty branches the lonely streetlight haloed by cold rain sing sing to the miles that separate make them disappear send the sad hush of mist to drape the cypress (bleeding knees a quivering sigh) my exhale intense to the sleeping sky say it Miles say it you know........ All Blues |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is my favorite---so far... smile but your format lends to the effectiveness of the visual which in turn lends to layering of your message---much like the jazzy theme depicted. Excellent poetry.  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I agree with Serenity, this is poetry. Wonderful poetry.. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Love it.  Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Aha! This is a fine offering to the binders' art. Nice to see this here, dude Ed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I too wish for the lampposts to always illuminate with the afterglow of faith wherever you go, dearest friend, may the miles thin in so you can see beyond the dfistance, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sparse, direct, smack. Yep.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Short, succinct, to the point---and successfully so! May the day bring you smiles, EA |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thanks for sharing, I really enjoyed the read Andrew |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I can hear each golden, rainy note. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Not a fan of the musical genre myself... but the fact that I could hear the music enough to recognize that, speaks kindly of your talent. Nice work, Mr. Sites. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah HA! Found you....voting now.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Amazing the imagery you've lent to the miles and to Miles Nice! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the suffering heart (burnished brass a quivering cry) in mute smoke rings rising to join the empty branches the lonely streetlight haloed by cold rain sing sing to the miles that separate make them disappear send the sad hush of mist to drape the cypress (bleeding knees a quivering sigh) my exhale intense =============================== any time I have the pleasure to read you... the words unique and creative come to mind. well done poet sir. " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Miles indeed... enjoyed the musical interlude... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Yep...very cool!!! I voted!!! Bridgette |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh yes!! You've got my vote! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Just a bump.... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"sing sing to the miles that separate make them disappear" glad this got bumped! enjoyed this very much! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Nice images here. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sigh..when you learn how great a writer you are you humble ass lol see ya bud |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
goodness! This is why I started reading poetry in the first place, the words, form, imagery, and fluidity were all excellent. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
so very well done.... regards, sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Love the content.. love the format. Would like to see this in the book Maree. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Wonderful. Enjoyed this greatly. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very good submission for the book. "Love makes the world go around" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's just after 3 a.m. and I miss you... damned miles...  |
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