navwin » Archives » Reflections on the Web » Forever in My Heart
Reflections on the Web
Post A Reply Post New Topic Forever in My Heart Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Brad Majors
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-02-17 11:38 AM



Though so far away
I feel your confusion
smell your tears
as they are carried
on the wind
I may be no prophet
no physician
I offer my heart
and eternal ear
stroking your hair
gently
whispering in your ear
princess it will be
alright
kissing your forhead
as you fall to sleep in
my arms
singing you sweetly
to dream
before returning home
saying a wish
a prayer
for you
for us
for me
kissing your mental
picture
as I fall to sleep

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
LoveBug
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697

1 posted 2003-02-17 03:51 PM


What a beatiful, comforting poem. NO! I refuse to leave it on page 2! It must be published!

Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2003-02-17 04:10 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes as with your golden heart you will always make your love so very happy and I know if it hasn't happened already, the distance between you will close up and you will be together forever with your love, this is a gorgeous love poem, I LOVE IT, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
3 posted 2003-02-17 04:33 PM


this is so tender.....
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2003-02-17 04:35 PM


Oh Brad, you are without a doubt one of my favorite poets here on Passions!  And this one is really special, my friend...will make a great addition to the book...

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
5 posted 2003-02-17 04:42 PM


This is beautiful.
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
6 posted 2003-02-17 07:32 PM


Brad, I love this one....Yep..
(had to check to see if I checked) LOL

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-17-2003 07:33 PM).]

ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
7 posted 2003-02-17 08:54 PM


very comforting love poem Brad...would make a nice addition for the anthology

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-17-2003 09:00 PM).]

Local Parasite
Deputy Moderator 10 Tours
Member Elite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg
8 posted 2003-02-18 02:17 PM


What a lovely, heartfelt poem.  Indeed, it rings with tones of soothing comfort.  Very nicely done, Brad.

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
9 posted 2003-02-18 02:20 PM



Ah yes...still loving this one, Brad.
It's so softly and tenderly penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

CocoBaci
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

10 posted 2003-02-19 11:58 AM


Enjoyed the read PoetFriendBrad...
*~coco~*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
11 posted 2003-02-19 12:03 PM


She must be very special to evoke such tender and loving words from your loving heart and poetic soul. Loverly, soooo very loverly!

Warm hugs,
EA

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
12 posted 2003-02-20 12:12 PM


Oh how very sweet this little poem is....

Bridgette

Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
13 posted 2003-02-21 12:16 PM


A new take on the phrase that distance makes the heart grow fonder.... Good write.

-Bob

Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
14 posted 2003-02-21 07:44 PM


A lucky lady indeed and how heartfelt this was.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
15 posted 2003-02-21 07:46 PM


Very nicely penned...
Very comforting..well done!
~hugs and a vote~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
16 posted 2003-02-21 08:03 PM


and a nice mental picture
M

skyshine
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars
17 posted 2003-02-21 09:10 PM


This is a very special poem, very expressive of the love you feel.

--Liz

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
18 posted 2003-02-23 03:01 PM


An overall 'feel good and warm'
poem, Brad. Thank you for
bringing a smile. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

DawnG
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
19 posted 2003-02-25 02:30 PM


A very beautiful love poem.

                              Dawn

Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
20 posted 2003-03-02 01:46 AM


Off to my library with this one.
fractal007
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

21 posted 2003-03-02 03:39 AM


A touching heartfelt poem.  Distance does make the heart grow fonder.

"If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"
-- Magus
"there is no good and evil, there are just sides."
-- Local Parasite

leighsa
Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America
22 posted 2003-03-02 03:43 AM


Oh My Gosh!!!! i cried for this poem!!!!
I have apoem sorta like that for my parents though, I hope my poem  called ONE gets to you with all its mighty.....

Ashgiel
age 14


JP
Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
23 posted 2003-03-05 01:31 PM


Yep this needs to be in the book.  well done

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
24 posted 2003-03-05 02:02 PM


When did this happen???  Why didn't you tell me?!?!  You know I love this piece.  Next time tell me would you??

Kisses, Susan

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
25 posted 2003-03-06 03:06 PM


  I love this, and it's fixing to get on page two, so........
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
26 posted 2003-03-06 03:11 PM


I have taken to reading this when I feel down..

My favorite.

Susan

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
27 posted 2003-03-07 01:48 AM


Voting now
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
28 posted 2003-03-19 01:01 PM


Brad - this is just . . . midnight whispers . . . lovely - congrats - you deserve it xxoo
Joyce Johnson
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
29 posted 2003-03-19 01:09 PM


I don't know how I missed this one.  Lovely.  Joyce
Charisma
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906
lost in blue pages
30 posted 2003-03-19 02:12 PM


Beautiful!

Charisma

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
31 posted 2003-03-19 03:09 PM


ugh sorry wish i'd voted before but seem you are already in..congrats!
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Reflections on the Web » Forever in My Heart

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary