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Sunkissed
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0 posted 02-16-2003 11:14 PM       View Profile for Sunkissed   Email Sunkissed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sunkissed


Set thunder to the distance
Where fire meets heaping black rock
Let the mirrors of life
Reflect your secrets
Make for us an answer

Tall brown ones bend and sway
Naked but never alone
They reach a hello to the painter
The One who brushed the sky
With kisses

Sleep, my love
In due season your soul
Shall revive

Sunkissed.


"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

[This message has been edited by Sunkissed (02-17-2003 07:32 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 02-16-2003 11:31 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

This is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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(smiles) This is so gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love those simple meditative sounds of Mother Earth and always cherish them with all my heart and ear! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I have my vote on it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Lady In White
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3 posted 02-17-2003 11:38 AM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White


Sunkissed...always a pleasure to read your writings...always!  However, in order for me to vote for it, my dear, you need to check your submission box!
Sunkissed
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4 posted 02-17-2003 07:43 PM       View Profile for Sunkissed   Email Sunkissed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sunkissed

Loner & Noah, thank you for your comments and for reading my work often. I appreciate that so much.

Lady in White, thanks for the extra push to get over here and the heads up. I never saw the little box when I first posted.

*hugs to you all*

Sunkissed.
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5 posted 02-17-2003 08:31 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"They reach a hello to the painter
The One who brushed the sky
With kisses"

beautiful beautiful imagery...
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6 posted 02-18-2003 01:08 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Love the imagery.  This seems to be quite a popular theme with the submissions for Reflections thus far, and it really matches the cover of the book, don't ya think?  Well, I think so.

Very nice poetry.  

Parasite

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~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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7 posted 02-18-2003 01:12 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Very, very beautiful...
Andrew Scott
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8 posted 02-18-2003 01:14 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

In particular, I liked those last two lines.  A tick for the beauty presented.
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9 posted 02-18-2003 01:31 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

You know I love this.
CocoBaci
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10 posted 02-19-2003 12:19 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Enjoyed the read PoetFriend Sunkissed...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*
Janet Marie
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11 posted 02-22-2003 06:52 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

They reach a hello to the painter
The One who brushed the sky
With kisses

Sleep, my love
In due season your soul
Shall revive
============================

surreal surrender....lovely lovely
unique writing SK.

oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ...
oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang
;)

Chanson
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12 posted 02-22-2003 10:59 PM       View Profile for Chanson   Email Chanson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chanson

"...They reach a hello to the painter..."

Sooo cool! *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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13 posted 02-23-2003 02:29 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

The one who brushed the sky with kisses - awesome!

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 02-23-2003 03:28 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Nicely written work... much enjoyed... thanks

regards,
sudhir
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15 posted 02-23-2003 10:03 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

What a wonderful description of what it is to create art... Thanks for posting!

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

Enchantress
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16 posted 02-23-2003 10:12 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Enjoyed so much...very well done and beautiful.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

vlraynes
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17 posted 02-23-2003 11:42 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


So beautifully penned.
I enjoyed this.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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18 posted 02-23-2003 11:45 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Most excellent -- this one's a keeper for sure.

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SPIRIT
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19 posted 03-13-2003 11:19 PM       View Profile for SPIRIT   Email SPIRIT   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SPIRIT

Much enjoyed. My vote is in.
WhiteRose
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20 posted 03-15-2003 11:50 AM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

Very nicely done, it gets my vote
Cerenity
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21 posted 03-26-2003 12:15 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Sunkissed,

Loved the imagery in this beauty,

Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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Earth Angel
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23 posted 04-04-2003 10:28 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Beautiful "Earth Tones"--and Sky Tones as well... Lovely imagery and feeling to this  wondrously poetic expression.  

Love & Light,
EA
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gorgeous. Has a mystical lean of spirituality to it that me likes very much!
 
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