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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-02-16 11:14 PM



Set thunder to the distance
Where fire meets heaping black rock
Let the mirrors of life
Reflect your secrets
Make for us an answer

Tall brown ones bend and sway
Naked but never alone
They reach a hello to the painter
The One who brushed the sky
With kisses

Sleep, my love
In due season your soul
Shall revive

Sunkissed.


"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

[This message has been edited by Sunkissed (02-17-2003 07:32 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-16 11:31 PM


This is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-16 11:53 PM




(smiles) This is so gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love those simple meditative sounds of Mother Earth and always cherish them with all my heart and ear! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I have my vote on it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-02-17 11:38 AM



Sunkissed...always a pleasure to read your writings...always!  However, in order for me to vote for it, my dear, you need to check your submission box!

Sunkissed
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4 posted 2003-02-17 07:43 PM


Loner & Noah, thank you for your comments and for reading my work often. I appreciate that so much.

Lady in White, thanks for the extra push to get over here and the heads up. I never saw the little box when I first posted.

*hugs to you all*

Sunkissed.

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5 posted 2003-02-17 08:31 PM


"They reach a hello to the painter
The One who brushed the sky
With kisses"

beautiful beautiful imagery...

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6 posted 2003-02-18 01:08 PM


Love the imagery.  This seems to be quite a popular theme with the submissions for Reflections thus far, and it really matches the cover of the book, don't ya think?  Well, I think so.

Very nice poetry.  

Parasite

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~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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7 posted 2003-02-18 01:12 PM


Very, very beautiful...
Andrew Scott
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8 posted 2003-02-18 01:14 PM


In particular, I liked those last two lines.  A tick for the beauty presented.
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9 posted 2003-02-18 01:31 PM


You know I love this.
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10 posted 2003-02-19 12:19 PM


Enjoyed the read PoetFriend Sunkissed...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*

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11 posted 2003-02-22 06:52 AM


They reach a hello to the painter
The One who brushed the sky
With kisses

Sleep, my love
In due season your soul
Shall revive
============================

surreal surrender....lovely lovely
unique writing SK.

oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ...
oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang
;)

Chanson
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12 posted 2003-02-22 10:59 PM


"...They reach a hello to the painter..."

Sooo cool! *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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13 posted 2003-02-23 02:29 AM


The one who brushed the sky with kisses - awesome!

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2003-02-23 03:28 AM


Nicely written work... much enjoyed... thanks

regards,
sudhir

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15 posted 2003-02-23 10:03 PM


What a wonderful description of what it is to create art... Thanks for posting!

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

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16 posted 2003-02-23 10:12 PM


Enjoyed so much...very well done and beautiful.
~Hugs~

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And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

vlraynes
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17 posted 2003-02-23 11:42 PM



So beautifully penned.
I enjoyed this.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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18 posted 2003-02-23 11:45 PM


Most excellent -- this one's a keeper for sure.

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SPIRIT
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19 posted 2003-03-13 11:19 PM


Much enjoyed. My vote is in.
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20 posted 2003-03-15 11:50 AM


Very nicely done, it gets my vote
Cerenity
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21 posted 2003-03-26 12:15 PM


Hi Sunkissed,

Loved the imagery in this beauty,

Cerenity

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We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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22 posted 2003-04-04 10:16 AM



Earth Angel
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23 posted 2003-04-04 10:28 AM


Beautiful "Earth Tones"--and Sky Tones as well... Lovely imagery and feeling to this  wondrously poetic expression.  

Love & Light,
EA

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24 posted 2003-04-04 12:19 PM


gorgeous. Has a mystical lean of spirituality to it that me likes very much!
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25 posted 2003-04-08 03:02 PM


Beautiful little poem,Sunkissed.You have my vote!

Peace,Geoffrey

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

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26 posted 2003-04-08 10:57 PM


Nicely rendered.  Joyce
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27 posted 2003-04-09 07:17 PM


such a lovely and refreshing
write...i dont normally quote a part
of a poem that i like but this is
just simply amazing imagery! you got
my vote. take care.
amy

"Tall brown ones bend and sway
Naked but never alone
They reach a hello to the painter
The One who brushed the sky
With kisses"

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

littlewing
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28 posted 2003-04-13 04:40 AM


Sun - this is lovely
such inspiration
reminds of the island of Kauai
where I left half of my heart
thank you
good luck
xxoo

passing shadows
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29 posted 2003-04-28 03:36 AM


like this
Sunshine
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30 posted 2003-05-05 09:16 AM



yep...want this one, that's for sure...

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31 posted 2003-05-09 07:34 PM


A very stimulating write that inspires the artistic in me to stand up and applaud. Most wonderful imagery expressed here. God bless.

-Bob

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