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Raindrops of Remember - A Sonnet

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Local Parasite
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25 posted 02-18-2003 06:28 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Girl, I gotta read more of your stuff, because this just blew me away.  This is the best poem that I've read from you, very flowing, very touching... you took this format and just made it yours.  Like the poem doesn't fit the format... rather, the format fits the poem.

Just how sonnet should be.  It's nice to see so many submissions of this format, I think yours is amongst the better ones and this is why I'm giving you my vote.

Parasite

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~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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26 posted 02-19-2003 12:21 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I was hoping you' submit this gem of pen and rhymes divine. Its a lovely choice to represent you poetess Vicky-girl

" ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ...
if it finds you worthy ...  it then directs your course."

K.Gibran

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27 posted 02-19-2003 12:31 AM       View Profile for angsana   Email angsana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angsana

Very heartfelt and passionate poem, love this from beginning till the end.  Memory is powerfully awesome thing.

angsana

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28 posted 02-19-2003 11:22 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

An absolute treasure of a poem dearFriend...
Hugs2u
*~coco~*
dgvarner
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29 posted 02-19-2003 12:27 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

lets try this again...it told me i didnt exist... ...

so..i like this one...   i hope you get this poem in the book!!!

lv,g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

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30 posted 02-19-2003 02:01 PM       View Profile for Kielo   Email Kielo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kielo

Again... You're my hero.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

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31 posted 02-19-2003 02:01 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

nice
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32 posted 02-19-2003 05:15 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Like a powerful gale off the ocean.
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33 posted 02-21-2003 12:29 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This just got me thinking....Is it truly better to have loved and lost or to never have loved at all!!!! LOVELY POEM!!!!!

Bridgette
Bill Charles
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34 posted 02-21-2003 12:30 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

vlraynes - these words read, my vote to you...

BC
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35 posted 02-21-2003 02:42 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Excellent work!!! *S*
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36 posted 02-22-2003 07:10 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

woah I didn't read this one before... *hugs* beautiful Mum

Sometimes you find a friend where once there wasn't one. Sometimes you find a love where once there was a friend.

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37 posted 02-23-2003 02:51 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

just snuck in for another read before i "off-lined"..

truly wonderful writing, this one...

enjoyed again...

hugs, g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

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38 posted 02-23-2003 08:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Perfect sonnet, Vicky! Bookworthy indeed!

[This message has been edited by Denise (02-23-2003 08:07 PM).]

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39 posted 02-24-2003 12:22 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Vicky,
Excellent write. Don't know where you found the rain!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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40 posted 02-24-2003 08:22 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

How did you sneak this one past me!?!!? Well, I'm voting for it anyway....so there!!!
aries_luv_ppl
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41 posted 02-24-2003 08:31 PM       View Profile for aries_luv_ppl   Email aries_luv_ppl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit aries_luv_ppl's Home Page   View IP for aries_luv_ppl

Lovely write!

~Every girl has a dream within.

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42 posted 03-16-2003 01:24 PM       View Profile for DawnG   Email DawnG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DawnG

Vicky,

This is very beautiful.

                             Dawn
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43 posted 03-16-2003 02:26 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

You write really well, Vicky.

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

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44 posted 04-20-2004 09:41 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

enjoyed reading this again
Vicky, you write so beautifully
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