Girl, I gotta read more of your stuff, because this just blew me away. This is the best poem that I've read from you, very flowing, very touching... you took this format and just made it yours. Like the poem doesn't fit the format... rather, the format fits the poem.
Just how sonnet should be. It's nice to see so many submissions of this format, I think yours is amongst the better ones and this is why I'm giving you my vote.
"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche