Bsquirrel: I like to take this poem at a slow-moderate pace. Reading it fast doesnít give it a good feel. As for helping it breath, Iíll consider any suggestions you care to make. Thanks for your thoughts... Iím always willing to listen and react to constructive criticism.
Justbleu: Thanks for the vote. Multiple interpretations are good because this one has many layers to consider. Iím always interested to know how a piece affects someone. Oh... and thanks for the bump!
Mysteria: A trumpet could work just as well, although a trumpet isnít really known for its curves. Now a saxophoneÖ Iíve always liked that ĎSí curve. And... sax and sex, well you make the connection. Thanks for the far-north support.
Chanson: Glad it came across as any of the above. Peace!
Lost Dreamer: WOW right back at cha. Ya, that first reading can be trickyÖ and if you didnít get it the first time that just means I did what I set out to do. Thanks for your seal of approval.
Dawn G: Smiles to youÖ thanks for the many reads and the thought you put into them. Harmonicas and flutes donít have much in the way of curves. Thanks for the kudos and vote.
Sunshine: Your words are most generous, though I wish you could vote twice too. But Iím sure Ron is watching for any ballot box stuffing.
Iíd like to point out that many saxophone cases are little more than black leather or canvas bags...thus, the line ďblack leather suit stripped.Ē I believe this caused Local Parasite some psoriasis. If anybody runs into LP, please let him know. I donít want him to develop a tic.