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The Sweetest Angel

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ThunderMage
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0 posted 02-14-2003 10:19 PM       View Profile for ThunderMage   Email ThunderMage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThunderMage

She came into my life that day,
I wasn't sure if I had a chance;
She was used to healing souls,
I was trained in a deadly dance.

Others before had hurt us both,
Neither one expecting this might from above;
But soon enough in the course of time,
We found the sweetest love.

Soon enough the pain returned,
I sacrificed my soul;
I had truly lost my mind,
I spun out of control.

But my angel forgave me,
Again she offered me her heart;
She healed my spirit once again,
My will to use my deadly art.

So when pain and rage corrupt my mind,
I always know where to turn;
I know the fire inside me now.
Let the flames of love burn!

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

© Copyright 2003 Liam Hall - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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1 posted 02-14-2003 10:38 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

Liam, this is a very intersting poem it seems you write about angels or ppl you belive are angels and guardian angels. anyways
this was avery nice read, keep writing

Regina

"heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 02-15-2003 01:14 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as you are a compassionate and faithful person who has so much love to give! (big hugggsssssss) There are obstacles to surmount but you can sympathize with it, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-15-2003 01:15 AM).]

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3 posted 02-15-2003 12:28 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

A very sweet poem.  Yours should be happy to have one so devoted.

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

ThunderMage
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4 posted 02-15-2003 01:45 PM       View Profile for ThunderMage   Email ThunderMage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThunderMage

She deserves every bit of it.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 02-19-2003 12:46 AM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

Good Poem
aries_luv_ppl
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6 posted 02-22-2003 12:07 AM       View Profile for aries_luv_ppl   Email aries_luv_ppl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit aries_luv_ppl's Home Page   View IP for aries_luv_ppl

I like it!

~Every girl has a dream within.

Justbleu
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7 posted 02-22-2003 01:18 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Very sweet!!!!!

Bridgette
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8 posted 02-23-2003 08:55 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

sometimes it seems our heavenly angels fly higher than we can reach...its good to have a local angel on hand to help us stand a little taller eh...

nice write...
hugs, g

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ellie LeJeune
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9 posted 02-23-2003 08:58 AM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Lovely ! How blessed you are! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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10 posted 02-23-2003 09:58 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

We all have angels in our lives.. but you recognize yours, and that is wonderful!!

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

ThunderMage
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11 posted 02-23-2003 10:30 PM       View Profile for ThunderMage   Email ThunderMage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThunderMage

Julie's my angel.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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12 posted 02-26-2003 05:05 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Voting for you.  Joyce
Kethry
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13 posted 03-01-2003 04:38 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

this is my fovourite of yours. This one gets my vote
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


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14 posted 03-01-2003 09:48 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Very sweet...much enjoyed.

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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15 posted 03-02-2003 03:10 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel

***Bump***



Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

leighsa
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16 posted 03-02-2003 03:15 AM       View Profile for leighsa   Email leighsa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for leighsa

I really injoyed your poem talking about love..
I believe i have felt it but not sre i am of course only 14 tell me what you think about my two poems One And A Hero....

Ashgiel

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17 posted 03-02-2003 03:28 AM       View Profile for fractal007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fractal007

A frank poem and one that gives me a great deal of reason to think on my own life.  I hope this one gets into the book!  Good luck with your love life.

"If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"
-- Magus
"there is no good and evil, there are just sides."
-- Local Parasite

nakdthoughts
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18 posted 03-09-2003 07:30 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts


So when pain and rage corrupt my mind,
I always know where to turn;
I know the fire inside me now.
Let the flames of love burn!

wonderful writing. I loved this one!
( I am glad you are there for Julie *s)
hugs to you both
M
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19 posted 03-18-2003 12:11 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I liked this very much... we all need an angel in our lives! *S*
Earth Angel
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20 posted 03-18-2003 01:33 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Sounds like a very sweet angel to me! With her by your side, you can conquer the world!

Warm hugs,
EA
Aimster
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21 posted 04-04-2003 09:04 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Liam

I've seen a lot of good work at this site,
but something was even more special about
your poem! You spoke to me...you have
a beautiful heart. i'm so glad you found
your love. We all need that!

Take care
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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22 posted 04-11-2003 10:22 PM       View Profile for SPIRIT   Email SPIRIT   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SPIRIT

passing shadows
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let 'em burn! yea!
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24 posted 05-02-2003 08:45 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

A poem in dedication to your guardian angel? This is so sweet!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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