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vandana
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0 posted 2003-02-14 08:12 PM


There are many reasons
I have for
Where my heart Is
Right now.
Where my heart will be?
Where my love Is.
A true love can only find
In an open heart
There are thousands things
In life
We can do to find a love
In a heart
If you look into yourself
See through your heart
You can see a love there
Standing here with open arms
Keep me warm
With your love Inside
Where my heart is
Right now
There is a way
To find a love
Through your heart
There will be brighter day
when you have that kind of a love
In your heart
There you will know
Where your heart Is.


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-20-2003 10:20 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-14 08:25 PM


It's always important to remember that love can often be found in the strangest places... even within the self.  

Well expressed.

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

Ina
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2 posted 2003-02-14 08:29 PM


I enjoyed this poem...it was quiet(spnever spell it right) nice...Love is a tricky thing(me thinks) and you wrote a wonderful poem about love.

Regina

"heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello

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3 posted 2003-02-14 08:45 PM


"There is a way
To find a love
Through your heart
There will be brighter day
when you have that kind of a love
In your heart"

I really liked this piece, especially the part I just quoted... thanks for sharing!

Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ

kaile
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4 posted 2003-02-14 11:18 PM


vandana,
this reminds me of Mariah Carey's song, "Hero" which is incidentally an all-time favourite...thanks for sharing

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5 posted 2003-02-15 01:43 AM




(smiles) Oh Vandana, this has my vote, you always write of romance so well, straight from the heart, and it all is spoken like song as old as rhyme! (kiss on cheek) To love from the heart like that is the special kind of love which you have in you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-02-15 01:55 AM



gorgeous and raw. just the way simplicity
gets its beauty. nice write.

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7 posted 2003-02-16 01:40 AM



Lovely thoughts here, Vandana.
I enjoyed this.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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8 posted 2003-02-17 01:34 AM


enjoyed your thoughts here.

((hugs))

Charisma

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2003-02-18 09:49 AM


Beautiful sentiments, Vandana ... very much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2003-02-18 10:05 AM



Vandana, I'm so very proud of you, that you have placed there here for consideration!  Good luck, little one!

Connel
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11 posted 2003-02-18 11:14 AM


Enjoyed

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

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12 posted 2003-02-18 11:27 AM


I know where some of your heart is!---It is written all over this page!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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13 posted 2003-02-18 04:18 PM


Excellently expressed... loved it...

Regards,
Sudhir

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14 posted 2003-02-18 06:38 PM


I like this.


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15 posted 2003-02-19 12:33 PM


Much enjoyed...on how your lines reveal a heart rich with sentiment carried on your sleeve...a click for you


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16 posted 2003-02-19 03:04 PM


I liked this very much, vandana... excellent work! *S*
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17 posted 2003-02-20 10:21 AM



You ready to post another one, Vandana?  

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18 posted 2003-02-20 10:23 AM


Quite excellent....ME LIKES!!!!!

Bridgette

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19 posted 2003-02-20 11:13 AM


This is an interesting slant on a great question.
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20 posted 2003-02-23 04:03 PM


A shared love is
worth working for
and treasuring.

Enjoyed, Vandana. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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21 posted 2003-02-24 11:02 AM


So true
Nan
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22 posted 2003-02-24 01:16 PM


I see - where your heart is, vandana...
Larry C
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23 posted 2003-03-02 03:42 PM


vandana,
So true.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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24 posted 2003-03-02 04:03 PM


Such lovely and true words.
Sandra

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25 posted 2003-03-02 04:06 PM


enjoyed.
Sven
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26 posted 2003-03-02 06:23 PM


excellent work my friend. . . you do know how the heart speaks. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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27 posted 2003-03-15 06:00 PM


Enjoyed the read of this. Nicely done.
Joyce Johnson
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28 posted 2003-03-15 06:59 PM


Nicely done.  Joyce
garysgirl
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29 posted 2003-03-16 01:44 AM


Vandana, I enjoyed this. It's very nicely done.
Ethel

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30 posted 2003-03-16 04:54 AM


Very easy to see where you keep your heart - out for everyone to see it!

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

DawnG
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31 posted 2003-03-20 02:22 PM


You have written your heart beautifully

        Dawn

Muys
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32 posted 2003-03-20 02:31 PM


Lovely words and
lovely memerys for me.

Muys
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33 posted 2003-03-20 02:34 PM


Lovely words and
lovely memorys for me.

Muys
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34 posted 2003-03-20 02:36 PM


Lovely words and
lovely memorys for me.

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