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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-02-14 05:58 PM


“VALENTINE LURKING”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I peeked my eyes out from the sheets,
thought I heard a little something,
from over here, or was it over there,
h’mmm thought I, it was alarming…

Did I hear the pitter patter of tiny feet,
a’hhh, it was under the bed say what,
dare I look into the dark of the under,
or was it a dream, only an afterthought…

I decided to hide once more in safety,
or so I thought cause it really was not,
then it happened, it just jumped on me,
hit me in the nose, really weighted a lot…

It spoke in gentle tones with words,
hi you, did I surprise you this morning,
my littlest angel, that’s who it was,
this one, the littlest valentine lurking…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
sellout007
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1 posted 2003-02-14 06:05 PM


Now that was sweet. Hopefully one day ill have my own very "littlest valentine"

Product Of A Broken Heart

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than

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2 posted 2003-02-14 06:11 PM


LOL Bill...
I hope the little dickens didn't hurt your noise, or should I say the little cupid?  LOL  

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3 posted 2003-02-14 09:42 PM












(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo cute, sweet friend, and right through the window and into a sweet happy hug and kiss the love goes!



(big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I wish I could be suprised like that some Valentines evening, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton










"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-02-15 07:09 AM


Such tenderness.... after the nightly suspense.
So lovely.
Margherita

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