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Open Poetry #24

Maze To Paradise

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-02-14 10:13 AM

Maze To Paradise

With your permission
I would like to take your hand
And walk with you through
The maze of life
It is a place in which
I get lost too
But together we can
Find our way
To Paradise

Happy Valetine's Day

"This we know - the Earth does not belong to man - man belongs to the Earth." Chief Seattle

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (02-14-2003 10:14 AM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-14 10:26 AM

This is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-02-14 12:28 PM

nice

sellout007
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL

3 posted 2003-02-14 03:37 PM

short, simple, but ever so sweet!

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

4 posted 2003-02-14 03:50 PM

Talk about being able to talk ever so sweet but putting it real simple. GREAT GREAT GREAT read!! BRAVO

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