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Open Poetry #24

The Crying Moon

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-14 04:22 AM

The Crying Moon

let me
sustain drink
the bitter
the sweet
let my
lips sip
from dew
let me
for once
touch joy
if there
be sadness
please
let me
hear the
crying moon

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-02-14 07:40 AM

Beautiful poem...and I really loved the ending!
Eric

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-02-14 07:43 AM

let me for once touch joy ....such a soothing though *somewhat contended sigh*
Thank you, I like this alot

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-02-14 08:06 AM

Sipping your dew. Very lovely.
Margherita

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