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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-02-13 11:41 PM


On any other day
a memory of you
passes silently

On any other day
your image fades
a flicker flame

But not this one
once more devoured
by the drama of you

A forked tongue
behind honeyed lips
my sweet defeat

Arms that held
in subtle squeeze
of life and spirit

Those perfect lips
and Judas kiss
I layed upon them

I knew betrayal
and I left you
with them not me

On any other day,
I could forget
but on not this one

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-13 11:42 PM


I like this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-02-13 11:46 PM


biology of pain....sigh

methinks Valentine is a cruel holiday...

but?

smile? Will you be my...



Valentine?

(then we'll smash all empty glasses for the blasphemy of no wine....) <--get it?
grin...take it and write me something beautiful?

love you bunches.

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-02-13 11:51 PM


Thanks loner

K biology or cannibalism? Either way the scalpel is in my hands, oh i hate this f-ing day. and yes i'll be yours any day

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-02-13 11:54 PM


Raph......
I hate seeing you sad......

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2003-02-13 11:57 PM


Ethel ever seen me any other way..sigh, i'm okay thanks for the warm words i'm okay..
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-02-14 02:46 AM


you so sad makes me so sad
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
7 posted 2003-02-14 09:46 AM


whats worse?
this one or new years eve?

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

8 posted 2003-02-14 09:52 AM


Lemme pull up a stool and wallow with ya!  
Cpat Hair
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9 posted 2003-02-14 09:54 AM


how about I buy the first round... I know a place on Market street... small bar we can sit inthe window, watch it rain..and swap stories...


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