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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2003-02-13 10:57 PM



My Valentine

My Valentine where have you been?
You’ve left me here, alone in dream
Time and time and time again
Surely this can’t be another game

Tell, me now, and tell me true
You’ll be my love, not leave me blue
Tell me now, that my love you’ll be
That together we’ll live, ever happily

A lifetime of love for us awaits
So don’t be shy, don’t hesitate
Open your heart, feel my charm
And walk with me, arm in arm


© Copyright 2003 E.T. Meehan - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-02-13 11:06 PM


Hi Eddie!
So great to see you posting!
A Happy Valentine's Day to you too!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

*Oh and I loved this poem too!*

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-02-13 11:07 PM


Oops...really loved it!
*Insert embarrassed smilie here*

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (02-13-2003 11:08 PM).]

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-02-13 11:07 PM


This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-02-14 12:05 PM


This is beautiful, but kinda sad...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-02-14 12:10 PM




(smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, I hope now you have your Valentine, as I don't have mine but will keep searching and hope I can have just once happy Valentines Day! (big hugggssssssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-02-14 02:43 AM


aw, Eddie...what a great piece! Missed you!
EagleOne
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7 posted 2003-02-14 09:02 PM


Thanks guys, glad you enjoyed! Take care!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

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