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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-02-13 07:56 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * * *

Cupid pierced my heart
So many moons ago
Through each and every vein
So much love began to flow

Love came so unexpectedly
All it took was just one dart
Life for me soon had more meaning
The day you claimed my heart

I love you more than ever
I cherish each and every day
And I know deep in my heart
That with me you'll always stay

As we two grow old together
Our love still feels brand new
How very blessed was I
On the day that I met you

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2003-02-13 07:59 PM


Sue, this is a very beautiful love poem.
Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-02-13 08:02 PM


Ah Sue!!  Does this man know how lucky he is?
But of course he does...
Have a wonderful Valentine's Day with your beloved.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Sun of faith
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3 posted 2003-02-13 08:06 PM


Very beautiful, im glad you have found such a love i hope we can all feel one day.
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-13 09:36 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, and I know he will always be lucky to have found your golden heart as you are so deserving of true happiness and we are all so happy for you both (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Black Swan
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5 posted 2003-02-13 09:46 PM


the picture, beautiful! the poem even more beautiful! ~ Talia
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6 posted 2003-02-13 10:16 PM


Sue:  A perfect Valentine poem for your husband! Thanks for sharing.

Love
Betty Lou

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passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-02-14 03:03 AM


I wonder if you have a sad or hateful bone in your body...such beautiful writings come from you always...like you are always so happy...
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-02-14 04:09 AM


Yes, a wonderful blessing...James
vlraynes
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9 posted 2003-02-14 06:13 AM



This is beautiful, Sue.
You've penned the love perfectly.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

BloomingRose
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10 posted 2003-02-14 07:04 AM


Gorgeous poem and pic!

Deb

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