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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-02-13 07:07 PM

Thinking of me,
could she be...weeping or dreaming?
'tis I weeping,
and dreaming, silently dreaming

...of some far off place
those lovers know
some safe, distant space
where colors glow
reds, blue and now green
as your eyes
that could not hide
a stare
sweet lover's stare
never seen
or felt
a touch...

Morning light comes crashing in
sweep away our secret sin
hide the truth
not again

'till nights next coming

Rf

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-02-13 08:30 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful Robert..
Simply amazing..your images...and use of colour.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-02-13 08:37 PM

Robert--If this is a dream, it is beautiful and safely yours.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-02-13 08:46 PM

I enjoyed the rhythm.
Lovely!
Margherita

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-02-13 09:09 PM

Robert, is it a dream or reality.....Just kidding. You don't have to answer that. It is really beautiful, whichever it is....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-14 03:10 AM

I love this one more than I can say, and more than you will ever know

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

6 posted 2003-02-14 07:15 AM

Sweet dreams...

Deb

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

7 posted 2003-02-14 08:45 AM

enjoyed this.

sunkissed.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-02-14 08:50 AM

Robert,
You know you can get in trouble with this kind of talk. LOL Enjoyed

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2003-02-14 08:51 AM

nicely done... I enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2003-02-14 08:56 AM

Wether dream or reality, it is a very beautiful write. Welcome to Passions.

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

11 posted 2003-02-14 08:58 AM

Appreciate all the warm comments! I'm becoming addicted to starting my days with you dear folk!

BTW...did, indeed, have this dream...once upon a time.

Rf

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2003-02-14 09:17 AM

There are many of us here at Passions with that very same addiction Robert....in this case it is a addiction that is worth having.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2003-02-14 10:47 AM

'tis I, weeping...

~*~

I AM enjoying your pen, and your muse...

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

14 posted 2003-02-14 11:36 AM

Thanks Sunshine!

Rf

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

15 posted 2003-02-14 12:54 PM

Robert - and should nights next coming be as tender as this write...

BC

sellout007
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL

16 posted 2003-02-14 02:23 PM

If only we could live in our dreams, how happy we would all be.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

17 posted 2003-02-14 03:04 PM

I loved the way this one read

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

18 posted 2003-02-14 03:45 PM

Words to make your heart skip beats!!

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