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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-02-13 05:53 PM



Elements of madness

circle overhead
distinctly too close

scraping the crown

of
my
head

scratching the brain?

unwrapping sent thoughts
wishing
i never had said

collapsing breath
sigh drowned

in mass of bodies

everyone has their mistakes

i regret
having nothing to regret.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-02-14 01:15 PM


nothing at all?
is that better,
very thought provoking writing

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-02-14 01:20 PM


thought-provoking write
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