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Waiting for Konrad.
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Waiting for Konrad. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
“Travis?” Iambe said as she laid a cheek against the cold wood wondering if it indeed was him. “Yeah, it’s me.” He replied. The deadbolt seemed to stick And the bind of steel against steel cage Drug her fingers off the knob once But she did unlock the door. Pulling it open She saw him framed against the blacker sky With his featured dimmed But not so vague she did not see The intense sadness in his face. “May I come in?” he asked. “Sure” she answered and stepped back. “Nice to see you Iambe.” His voice trembled. “wish it were under more pleasant circumstances.” Her pupils dilated as they adjusted to the words. “What you mean?” she asked. “I talked to Konrad, he told me he’d like for me to wait and let him tell you.” He murmured as he looked down. “Got another cup of that coffee?” he asked. “In the kitchen.” She replied and watched him step around her to go get it. “Let’s sit here at the table.” He said “Konrad should be along soon.” ………………………………………………………………. Some nights the wind sighs whispersof your name Some times the snow flies and I find myself insane I saw the change of seasons missing you my dear Now I’m wishing for the springtime and winter roads to clear They say the roads all lead two ways one out and one back But every time I travel one it seems there is a lack I have not found my way back to you after all this time Yet I still must ask myself were you ever really mine [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (02-13-2003 03:48 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Now.... I am not writing any more Iambe...until a certain MS Sunshine get Konrads saga resolved...and I expect anyone who want to pressure her into getting it written....to send her a nasty e-mail telling her she is a slacker  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
mumble mumble...someone's GOT to wake Konrad up from that danged migraine |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you put him there... ou get him out...or Travis is going to have a cup of coffee and leave iambe with a certificate and you to explain it... to HER |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OOOH Hurry Up Konrad!! Can't wait to hear the news! Also enjoying the rhyming 'song' verses at the end Ron... I've almost got them set to music in my head.  ~Hugs~ *Hurry up Sunshine*  ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
EXPLAIN WHAT??? Karilea...hurry up!!  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I don't know about this Konrad, but the poem at the bottom..... leaves me speachless....it is so great! Love it! Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
KARI???? DO you want to be the one responsible for the moth being denied rhyme?????????? ( i do believe this is payback for the poetic blackmail I endured last week) You and Capt really layed it on thick... perhaps you should have to RHYME the Konrad saga???  Captain? Some nights the wind sighs whispers of your name Some times the snow flies and I find myself insane I saw the change of seasons missing you my dear Now I’m wishing for the springtime and winter roads to clear They say the roads all lead two ways one out and one back But every time I travel one it seems there is a lack I have not found my way back to you after all this time Yet I still must ask myself were you ever really mine *SIGH* All is forgiven .... ( damn I'm so easy for rhyme) LOL |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Karilea HURRY UP!!!!!!  .. . Capt. Ron, I like the verses at the end, too...... and can't wait to see the next one...  |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"I saw the change of seasons missing you my dear" have put to memory lines and lines of poetry...must now make room for another. Rf |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
OMG! That poem at the end brought back The Bridges of Madison County in vivid color. That was absolutely beautiful and I hope you don't mind I frame it? The girls will tell you I do that with poetry that stirs my soul. And this gave it a stir big time. This whole sage is spectacular, hurry the heck up Karilea ~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dont mind me...Im just a gloating moth... enjoying the reaction to your rhymes IMMENSELY. Promise you will post them all on one thread when your melodic muse finishes that ballad... but TAKE YOUR TIME...cant rush rhyme divine. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Some nights the wind sighs whispersof your name Some times the snow flies and I find myself insane I saw the change of seasons missing you my dear Now I’m wishing for the springtime and winter roads to clear' Really like the way you're ending these Ron. Is a nice change in style. Even the rhyme's cool! So.... Where is Konrad???? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Perfect read for a chilly Arizona rainy night! Thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Ron, I can't wait to see where this conversation goes, I think it could be taken at so many angles but one in particular can fill the hues of the moment! (big hugggsssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks again for the shove... |
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