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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-02-12 08:06 PM

Evenly spread
though knife so blunt
unprecise
smothering unspoken hate
that rots
over all it covers

Binding the spine
like book
attached to thinking
in deceitful dark
blindfolded
to opposites.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-02-12 08:30 PM

This is intense poetry.
Great job.
Eric

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-12 08:31 PM

I Like the darkness.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-12 08:41 PM

Gemma, this one hurts...

Sometimes unspoken words are the most
hateful and hurtful ones...

:

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-02-12 08:58 PM

some are not as open as they books
they read, sad.......but some do make the world go round still, thank the lord, or buddha or whomever

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-02-12 09:39 PM

Ah a little darkness, me likes it

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-02-13 12:00 PM

Hard. Intense. Bitterly focused on the vision, and exposing it like a debriding knife clearing detritus from a festered wound.

I like your style. Like it a lot.

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winston
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 204
NW of Eden

7 posted 2003-02-13 11:07 AM

Illuminating.

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-02-13 11:15 AM

were you in my mind the other day *s?

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-02-13 12:22 PM

I can relate...good write gemma

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