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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-02-12 04:43 PM



To dress the skies
when
they sit far better
undressed

like the way
you
feel
far far better
disguised

freedom from prying eyes
covers
the hole in soul
crippled

when
their words
strip us bare.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-12 04:47 PM


I love the way your imagry leaps off the screen.
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-12 04:51 PM


Awesome imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-02-12 05:45 PM


Gemma, this is beautifully written.......
but, with a kind of sad feel about it.
.
.
Again, are you okay???????

I sure do hope so....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

gemjop
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4 posted 2003-02-12 06:19 PM


Thanks for your replies. very much appreciated

Ethel mae, yes, i'm fine,thanks for your concern as always friend. i think after having not written for so long on here, the words keep on coming, even thoughts that i'm not actually feeling come out sometimes. it feels good to be back here reading you all again. you all inspire me.
i don't know where the sadness in my poetry comes from actually...considering i'm so in love??
i suppose from past, and other peoples present situations.

again, thanks for the replies.

lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-02-12 09:44 PM


i don't know where this is coming from but it's awesome stuff keep it coming
garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-02-12 10:12 PM


Yeah, Gemma, it is awesome writing....and, that's what proves
a good poet, when he or she makes the reader feel
so much that they think it's real...Keep up the good work....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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