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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 02-12-2003 03:18 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Susan Caldwell

I dare not say from what depths this came from...

Future Love

Hey, future love, where are you?
And why arenít you here with me?
Donít you feel me waiting?
Just how long are you going to be?

I wonít tolerate the absence
I need you now, not at some distant time
Donít you sense my need?
Donít you want my rhythm and rhyme?

I am tired of waiting
Come give me what I yearn
A partner for dinner and movies
A love from which to learn

Hey, future love, Iím so tired
Of a cold bed, and perfect sheets
I want your arms around me
I want a love that completely depletes

So, my future lover, partner and friend
I stand, impatiently tapping feet
Hurry love,
And stop being so damn discreet
© Copyright 2003 Susan Caldwell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-12-2003 03:59 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

I love this. I can imagine you tapping your toe. Love will find you usually when you stop looking
Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 02-12-2003 04:01 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Thank you kind sir.  

I don't know.  You would not believe some of the stories I have...(sigh).
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3 posted 02-12-2003 04:06 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

Never lose hope. You will find that one who will sweep you off your feet and ride off on the white horse or at least decent car.
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4 posted 02-12-2003 04:26 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

love your honesty susan. even when we're pretending we've stopped looking for love, we all are secretly doing our fair share of toe tapping!
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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My mom used to cross her arms and tap her feet at me alot?....But, would a trip to Kmart, cemetary and McDonalds help dear?
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lol love this sis. poor, poor euwy! i love you. does that help?
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Susan, a very good write...but, I  really wasn't looking, (and neither was he), when my Love and I found each other. In fact, we became very good friends before we fell in love with each other.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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I thoroughly enjoyed this! I believe that every one of your female readers has experienced this at one time or another! With a winsome wit such as you have, I doubt that you will have to wait much longer! lol

Warm hugs,
EA
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Gemjop-Without a doubt!

Toe-God, how I love your humor! McD's and Kmart are good, but just what would we do in the cemetary?

Dearest Sister-Don't you know its your love that helps me get through this life?

Garygirl- Oh, the stories I have of male "friends"!  Remember the movie, "When Harry met Sally"?  Harry was sooooo right...

EA- Thank you so much!

Susan C.
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10 posted 02-13-2003 09:55 AM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

Up for all the love struck dreamers
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11 posted 02-13-2003 11:14 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Well Susan...what else?..."Get "laid" to rest?"
Susan Caldwell
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Toe,
Ohhhh...and that is exactly the depths from which I didn't speak.  How ever did you guess?
Time and exact location please.  

Brad,

If you are trying to make me feel special, its working.

Susan
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13 posted 02-14-2003 01:34 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

susan you'll find that special someone
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OK, Susan, let's get on this thing RIGHT AWAY!  Good Poem!  I can feel your impatience...tapping toe!

Rc
Susan Caldwell
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You name the place.

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enjoyed
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17 posted 06-04-2003 02:09 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

still very cool
 
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