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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 02-12-2003 09:50 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

{"Incase I can read his mind,
he dreams in his own language"}


I wanted to tell you;
      remind you of
blinding light,      angels
sliding,    until fires
of  night        break the sea

I glanced away:
I couldn’t understand
       summer rain   tapping
silent glass
   giving me time to think
while the world sails   on,
over harmony,   or how
clocks of stone time,
strike walls of nig
ht

I've never seen wild daffodils;
my imagination is kind

    I watch through    panes,
on such a day:
the pool   reflects
different memories
above water  --

time slipped by so fast

{sometimes}  like the mist
of rain  touching  
    soft   embracing
    
upon earth

Dreams call my name
    with sweet abandonment:
deep and beautiful falling around me
from which season   are my eyes sad
in   horizons     sky

I       awoke     crying:
remembering the nights

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

© Copyright 2003 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-12-2003 09:54 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

If this isn't poetry, then I don't know what is!

Warm hugs,
EA
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2 posted 02-12-2003 10:33 AM       View Profile for Moonlight Romeo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moonlight Romeo

I know that everyone has nights like these.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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It is poetry and excellent poetry at that. But nothing unusual from dear sweet Lauren. Nice. And good to have you here. Miss ya'.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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(big hugggssssss) I too remember nights like that, and it can be so emotional for me when I know they are jot real but they feel so tangible! (sad sigh) This is sadly gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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highways, & byways, for now


5 posted 02-12-2003 11:49 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Greeneyes - these nights come and overtake at times, but they pass with gentle words to read from your pen...

BC
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6 posted 02-12-2003 11:51 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Lauren, this is sad, yet beautiful. I miss your words, Lady....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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I wanted to tell you;
      remind you of
blinding light,      angels
sliding,    until fires
of  night        break the sea

I glanced away:
I couldn’t understand
       summer rain   tapping
silent glass
   giving me time to think
while the world sails   on,
over harmony,   or how
clocks of stone time,
strike walls of night

====================================


*sigh* ... yes ... pure unadulterated poetry in motion.
Exquisite!!
     

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8 posted 02-12-2003 12:23 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

GreenEyes~
Captivating title ... splendid read~
*Huglets* to you, poetess~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 02-12-2003 12:25 PM       View Profile for Robert Frazier   Email Robert Frazier   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert Frazier

Nice flow, and powerful imagery.  Something there I could feel...sadness, maybe.

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awesome write! subtle but powerful, and a bit sad too
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Excellent poetry!


Deb
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Lady L~  absolutely lovely hon...
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