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Duncan
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0 posted 2003-02-12 12:37 PM



I miss you
please ignore me
you know how I can get

it’s just another
of those nights
when I am barely fit

for conversation
or company
no matter the intention

I’m determined
to be sinsick
you my indiscretion

[This message has been edited by Duncan (02-12-2003 01:13 AM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-02-12 12:53 PM


ROTFL. Actually, I'm still laughing at your reply to Raph's YaddaBlahBlahBlah.
You guys are so funny. But I really am sorry that LOVE didn't fulfill you, only tempt you.  And yes, I am still fasting.

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2 posted 2003-02-12 01:36 AM


Duncan,
the title is awesome! i wish i had thought of it myself. I also like how your title fits the content in your last stanza

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3 posted 2003-02-12 01:39 AM


nice one
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4 posted 2003-02-12 01:41 AM




(sigh) I too have these side effects and know them all too well, I want to keep my sanity but find bliss all the same as I rarely have tasted it yet! (big hugggsssssss) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Salty
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5 posted 2003-02-12 01:42 AM


I'll have to remember this...when I'm having one of those days.

Very well said...indeed


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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6 posted 2003-02-12 01:51 AM


Very good, Duncan. I enjoyed reading...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2003-02-12 07:49 AM


it’s just another
of those nights
when I am barely fit

for conversation
or company
no matter the intention

I’m determined
to be sinsick
you my indiscretion
================================


yeppers ... know the feeling well...
its called "moth miserable in your own skin"

the slooooow burn of an old ache....

Dunc...were gonna make ya an offical male moth yet

classic Duncan poetry...and thats a very good thing

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2003-02-12 11:13 AM


oh...and about the rhyme?
does this mean Im rubbing off on you lmao

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9 posted 2003-02-12 11:14 AM



Yeah, JM's rubbing
off...


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10 posted 2003-02-12 11:26 AM


Duncan... tight..rhymed and that hint of cutting self appraisal that sometimes leads us to not like the reflections....

well done...

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2003-02-12 12:32 PM


Duncan - another one of those nights, geez do I know them at times...

BC

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