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paladin
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0 posted 2003-02-11 02:15 PM


A frozen moment
Born of water,dust and cold
Killed by the warm sun

paladin

....a knight without armor

© Copyright 2003 Robert E. Jackson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-11 02:22 PM



Ouch.  I'm sorry!  

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2 posted 2003-02-11 02:38 PM


I love haiku - nice capture

God bless and keep you, Namaste!
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3 posted 2003-02-11 04:12 PM


I can feel that warm sun.

beautiful.

Maree

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4 posted 2003-02-11 04:13 PM


This is filled such neauty and grace

Cold hands means a warm heart

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5 posted 2003-02-11 04:14 PM


nicely done and depending on how the reader wishes to interpret can go to painful or hopeful in meaning.... nice indeed.
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6 posted 2003-02-11 05:07 PM


Robert..you do these so wonderfully!
Much enjoyed this one today.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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7 posted 2003-02-11 05:37 PM


Hello Homey  
You know I love these "verses"....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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8 posted 2003-02-11 05:52 PM


damn this is perfect!  absolutely
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9 posted 2003-02-12 12:58 PM




(sigh) These are wonderful, sweet friend, I love the imagery you weave together, this is animated with magic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2003-02-12 04:31 AM


I'd love to have snowflakes here...but only briefly
bbent
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11 posted 2003-02-12 04:56 AM


I'd vote for that.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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