Open Poetry #24 |
Snow flake |
paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
A frozen moment Born of water,dust and cold Killed by the warm sun paladin |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ouch. I'm sorry! |
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Bohemianaus Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 69Australia (South Gippsland) |
I love haiku - nice capture God bless and keep you, Namaste! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I can feel that warm sun. beautiful. Maree |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is filled such neauty and grace Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done and depending on how the reader wishes to interpret can go to painful or hopeful in meaning.... nice indeed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Robert..you do these so wonderfully! Much enjoyed this one today. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Homey You know I love these "verses".... "Love makes the world go around" |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
damn this is perfect! absolutely |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) These are wonderful, sweet friend, I love the imagery you weave together, this is animated with magic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'd love to have snowflakes here...but only briefly |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
I'd vote for that. Live like it's your last day... |
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