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GG
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0 posted 2003-02-11 06:34 AM



Time is whispering
Harsh reality to me;
It is still moving.

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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1 posted 2003-02-11 06:40 AM



Good morning...
this has a swift click
to it,
comes and goes in a heartbeat...

GG
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2 posted 2003-02-11 06:42 AM


thank you Sunshine
and morning? its 3:40 AM!
But yes, swift... much like life.. how it is taken away.. or given too, for that matter.

Always, Alyssa


- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-11 08:07 AM


Wow...so much said in so few words.
Very moving and beautiful.
Thanks.
Eric

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4 posted 2003-02-11 10:34 AM




Alyssa,

Interesting write. So it is. Hope we don't run out of it.


Hugs to you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2003-02-11 10:40 AM


GG - and so it moves on unwavering, never waiting...

BC

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6 posted 2003-02-11 10:50 AM


Yes, Alyssa, time is something that we can't stop...ever moving...
.
.
And, just what are you doing up so late, young lady??  lol  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

GG
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7 posted 2003-02-11 05:56 PM


Eric,
thanks ..and your welcome! I'm glad you find it beautiful, even moving!

Pat,
yes running out would be bad... however, its stopping for awhile wouldn't be so disappreived as far as I'm concerned. Thanks!

Bill,
yes, never waiting. This was written in refernce to after death.. when it seems all things should stop, for just awhile, as they do in your mind. Thanks for replying

Ethel,
wouldn't it be weird if time did stop... And uhh ..homework! I always do homework at 4 in the morning. Or write poems! Thanks for replying.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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