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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-02-11 04:22 AM


Cupid Needs Glasses

Is cupid cross eyed
He’s always missing me
Tries to aim at my heart
He hits the nearest tree

Cupid needs practice
I am the living proof
Last year he flew over
Landed upon my roof

I am sure cupid’s blind
Maybe blind as a bat
Watched him one year
He took aim at my cat

I watch him each year
Flying right passed me
Convinced  its his eyes
Poor cupid cannot see

I'm writing a note to say
Its now me on a mission
Dear Cupid get glasses
Go and see an optician

Mailed him an eye chart
Along with my letter
This year I am  hoping
His aims getting better


Hope©2001


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bbent
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1 posted 2003-02-11 05:02 AM


This is really cute.Maybe leave some milk and cookies,seems to work for Santa.I enjoyed,Thanks.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Black Swan
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2 posted 2003-02-11 05:04 AM


this poem is adorable! thankyou or sharing it love is blind,so i guess cupid is too.hehe ~Talia
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-02-11 06:47 AM


"Mailed him an eye chart
Along with my letter
This year I am  hoping
His aims getting better"
a morning's smile for you, very cute.


M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-11-2003 06:51 AM).]

GG
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4 posted 2003-02-11 06:56 AM


Thank you for the grin!
This is so cute


Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-02-11 07:14 AM


Thanks all I was glad to share the fun , it does seem pay
to keep a sense of humour on Valentine day
Hope

Nan
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6 posted 2003-02-11 09:21 AM


ROTFL... This is just tooooo cute, Hope - I sure Hope Cupid finds his way to you this year...
Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-02-11 09:24 AM


And all this time I though old cupid was pissed off at me!!  

Very cute!

Susan C.

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8 posted 2003-02-11 09:31 AM


!!! Very nice !!!

Poetry's supposed to be about "wit and wisdom" -- this one's got both.

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9 posted 2003-02-11 11:32 AM



Hope,


Adorable! What a great sense of humor.
Liked this very much.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

HopeS
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10 posted 2003-02-11 11:37 AM


Thanks poet friends , your replies have been equally nice and fun to read
Hope

Robert Frazier
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11 posted 2003-02-11 11:40 AM


This made me smile and laugh!  What a classy, clever poem!  You should watch out, he'll probably hit you when least expected!

Rf

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12 posted 2003-02-11 12:59 PM


hehehe...uncontrolled giggling....this is so cute! I really enjoyed this write, cheered me up a bit today
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13 posted 2003-02-12 09:17 AM




(giggles) Silly cupid, that was a valiant effort, but you still have a lot of practice to do before you can be like a seraph! (kiss on cheek) Here's hoping he will succeed this time, this is a sad but also beautiful and cute poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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