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DragonFang
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0 posted 2003-02-11 04:13 AM


Float down this stream I've made
Where the water is warm
And leads to a distant glade

Imagination reigns
To prosper in life
And leave life's chains

Leave the barren ground
Go to where you know
Your happiness will be found

Walk through the Gate
That lies at journeys end
That is where I'll wait.


http://www.heisen.net  Peace Through War, it is beginning!

[This message has been edited by DragonFang (02-11-2003 06:48 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-02-11 06:59 AM


very nice...

(did you mean to  have the word in the first line be stream instead of steam?)

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Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-02-11 12:07 PM


yes this is very nicely done!
the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-02-11 12:12 PM


This is very beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

DragonFang
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4 posted 2003-02-11 01:36 PM


nakdthoughts: umn, yes. I guess that's what I get for writing poetry when very tired (:
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-02-11 06:14 PM


you do know that if you  go into editing you can correct that mistake...even up to a day later
just letting you know for next time.
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DragonFang
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6 posted 2003-02-11 06:49 PM


Yeah, I know. I was just feeling a bit lazy (: 's fixed now.

http://www.heisen.net  Peace Through War, it is beginning!


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