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Scattered Pieces
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
Promise me... That when I shatter, You will pick up the scattered pieces So that once it is all over, I can put myself back together And once again be whole... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you know we'll be sitting around here with whisk brooms and dustpans to make sure we get them all... want us to bring the elmers? nicely said...and a plea |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yes this is a good poem. Full of feeling Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
Thank you Cpat & Julie... Don't know what I'd do without my "Poet" friends.... Seems I can't find a dustpan around here these days... BlueEyes |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
If this reflects current mood, you've come to a good place to shatter. Plenty of "pick you uppers" here! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We are all puzzles and sometimes miss a piece or two ..... Lovely thought, even if born in a moment of "risk"! Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...I will be there, but I'm not sure it's me you want there...this write is seemingly accepting that you are going to shatter one day and there's nothing you or anyone can do to prevent it...and I know how that feels. Good short powerful piece! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very powerful piece that I can really relate to. Well done. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
short and to the point...I have a spare dustpan, I can lend or better still, a shoulder  hugss M |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tera, I know how these feel. I will tell you , though, that this is just the place to do that. There are lots of dustpans (shoulders) in this great big family of friends. And all of them are right there with a compassionate and loving ear...I know...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Not to worry Tera... We'll be here to catch you should you fall. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Don't worry BlueEyes, I've shattered so many times, I bet I have Humpty Dumpty beat! lol. We're all here for you. Good write. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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