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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-02-11 06:03 PM



Is it visible?

Are you woven
Like pigment delicate
Into my skin?

Are they marvelling
At my picture?

Taking their breath
With the depth
Of my sky at night

Emotion twinkles
As it doubles over with pleasure-pain
Multiplying soul love

Future I can only hope for

If I die now
Content you’ll find in my remains

I feel the belonging
Gravitational excellence
Has pulled me so tight to you.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-02-11 07:07 PM


Very nice...James
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-02-11 07:50 PM


This is a wonderful poem!
Eric

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