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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-02-10 02:07 PM


“JUST FOR YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If I were to write a poem about you,
would you then read it with a smile,
knowing it’s from me with tenderness,
full of romance not known for a while…

I ask of your heart of what it would do,
beat a little faster perhaps, or miss,
your eyes, if they would sparkle brightly,
or perhaps a soft tear from one kiss…

This night I take it upon me to write,
my muse whispered for me to continue,
words so that you can see me from within,
in this love poem I write just for you…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-10 02:09 PM


This is a very good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-10 02:10 PM


Oooh, I would just swoon if someone wrote something so romantic for me. Lovely Bill as usual. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-02-10 02:14 PM


*smiling here*
Wonderful Bill...yes..I would swoon also.
(Swooning runs in our family)
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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4 posted 2003-02-10 04:38 PM


Beautiful poem.
Eric

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5 posted 2003-02-10 05:12 PM


Any woman who was to read these tender words, would be envious of the one for whom they were written--and secretly wish it were she herself!

Valentine hugs,

EA

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6 posted 2003-02-10 05:43 PM


I feel the tenderness in your beautiful poem.
No woman's heart would be indifferent to these words of love.
Margherita

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7 posted 2003-02-10 07:48 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as I dream of making my love feel this way, knowing my words are exclusively for her and only her! (big hugggssssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-02-10 08:01 PM


Very romantic write, Bill..

believe in what your heart feels...

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9 posted 2003-02-10 08:03 PM




Bill,

How sweet and touching; so romantic.


Pat

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10 posted 2003-02-10 10:37 PM


bill,
everyday is valentines day with your loving
poetry

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11 posted 2003-02-10 10:39 PM


Bill, this is so beautiful.
I love it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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12 posted 2003-02-10 10:42 PM


Awwww   Bravo.

Hugs,
Tara

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