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All that Brine
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All that Brine |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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All That Brine It swiftly downs this page of blue. Quickly fading out of view. And our senses shed some tears As it quickly disappears How sad the feelings of our heart This precious poem we would impart. These feelings of a grieving soul The missing of a hoped for goal This living breathing passions site This place you send your heart in write The pain to summon all the words This place to fly our freedom bird I cannot speak for all that post And since a member not the host I empathize your loving thought And cry with you for all the naught. I’ll hold your hand if you hold mine We’ll make an ocean of the brine. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'll hold your hand anytime, Sweet Sy...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! This is such a loving and compassionate piece of writing that most assuredly comes straight from your heart. There is so much comfort in your caring words---not to mention that you imparted them in exceptionally fine poetic form! I too, extend my hand to you if ever you were to need comfort from this little "angel"... Valentine hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh you know I would hold your hand anytime Sy! Such a compassionate morning read. Much enjoyed..shall I pour tea? ~Morning hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, That goes both ways.  Earth Angel It's always good to have an angel that cares. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, By all means pour the tea and we'll have hugs for derert.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This reminded me ever so much of the Bedknobs and Broomsticks song "The Beautiful Briny" and just had me wishing I could live down there and dance with the mermaids! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend for the read and comment. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey you! smile... aw...geez.... heh....  psssst....sy? (and somehow it all makes sense...)  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"This living breathing passions site This place you send your heart in write The pain to summon all the words This place to fly our freedom bird" Oh so true....I enjoyed this very much. Susan C. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - a heartfelt write this morning....maybe you need ummm...I know!! How about bright, golden marmalade on your toast with tea to-day? Okie Dokie!! hugs to you dear gentle man. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enjoyed this Sy... and as usual..the truths contained in it... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...I’ll hold your hand if you hold mine We’ll make an ocean of the brine. It's a deal! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your poems will never be lost to an ocean of brine ... for I put them in me library and call them mine all mine. *winkiewinkie* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Or how 'bout I grab some shrimp and we make lunch?  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, And some how so do you. Susan, It was a joy to write, thank you. Chris, Golden marmalade on my toast with tea to-day? Okie Dokie!! I'm on my way. Cpat, Glad you enjoyed. Martie It's a deal, hugs. JM, Your library must be getting full, LOL WWRS Duncan That's funny, that's what I had for lunch today, LOL. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I need new glasses. I misread brine the first time. I substituted brain. LOL, the poem was still quite interesting, if a bit confusing. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: This could well be Passions' second motto, Sy... for as in your wisdom, we all fly... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - "I’ll hold your hand if you hold mine. We’ll make an ocean of the brine." Yes indeed we would... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun Then that would be pickled brain, maybe your right. Sunshine That would be nice. Bill, Yes indeed we would, LOL |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Seymour, There are no sweeter tears, than what you, loving, mention here! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Robert, Thank you for the gentle comment. |
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