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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2003-02-10 03:24 AM


take me down
yeah...take me down.
I watch the eyes to see the move
a processed thought
of just a glance
betrayal of the plan--

(if y'can...)
just take me down
and beat me with the whuppin' stick
but as I'm laying on the ground
you watch
that spot
b'tween yer legs...

I'll spit the blood
and save the teeth
feel my-pulse-throb lower lip.
take me down?
Let's dig the grave
and look for other souls to save
in this southern slip of clay...


I have an instinct
born of rage.


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-02-10 03:39 AM


remind me not to get on your bad side...
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2003-02-10 04:03 AM


yikes!
Yea, I'm staying off the bad side too. ..but then, I think we all bite. You though, you fight!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2003-02-10 12:35 PM



Oww.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-02-10 12:39 PM


I suggest that you get out of the other side of bed tomorrow morning! ---and may I say how incredibly beautiful, talented and  intelligent you are! tehe

Love, Light & PEACE

EA

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
5 posted 2003-02-10 04:03 PM


If I was closer I'd do it myself and save those pretty hands of yours for writing. Hugs
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

6 posted 2004-11-03 12:40 PM


Smiling...a hushed "incredible" leaves my lips.

DIWUWMML

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2007-10-28 11:33 AM


enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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