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southern slip

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 02-10-2003 03:24 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

take me down
yeah...take me down.
I watch the eyes to see the move
a processed thought
of just a glance
betrayal of the plan--

(if y'can...)
just take me down
and beat me with the whuppin' stick
but as I'm laying on the ground
you watch
that spot
b'tween yer legs...

I'll spit the blood
and save the teeth
feel my-pulse-throb lower lip.
take me down?
Let's dig the grave
and look for other souls to save
in this southern slip of clay...


I have an instinct
born of rage.

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passing shadows
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displaced


1 posted 02-10-2003 03:39 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

remind me not to get on your bad side...
GG
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2 posted 02-10-2003 04:03 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

yikes!
Yea, I'm staying off the bad side too. ..but then, I think we all bite. You though, you fight!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Duncan
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3 posted 02-10-2003 12:35 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan


Oww.
Earth Angel
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4 posted 02-10-2003 12:39 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

I suggest that you get out of the other side of bed tomorrow morning! ---and may I say how incredibly beautiful, talented and  intelligent you are! tehe

Love, Light & PEACE

EA
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


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If I was closer I'd do it myself and save those pretty hands of yours for writing. Hugs
Dark Angel
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6 posted 11-03-2004 12:40 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Smiling...a hushed "incredible" leaves my lips.

DIWUWMML

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

Artic Wind
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enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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