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GG
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0 posted 2003-02-10 02:26 AM



Man of Sorrows,
Come, and help me mourn.
For I am tearful,
Cursed the day when I was born.

And I’m still growing,
In my love, and faith, and hope.
But Lord,
I still, don’t quite know how to cope.

I saw death before my eyes
And I leaned towards You.
With a stare and silent cries
I watched life as it was through.

Man of Sorrows,
Please, show me Your hand.
I’m weak; lend me Your shoulder,
Help me stand.

In You is light to lead
Through stormy night.
Man of sorrows,
Please, help me
Mourn tonight.



- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)


[This message has been edited by GG (02-10-2003 03:23 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-02-10 02:27 AM


oh Alyssa, this is so sad...
regards2you
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2 posted 2003-02-10 07:59 AM



Oh Alyssa, this is so beautiful.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

GG
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3 posted 2003-02-10 08:07 AM


Dixie, Pat,
thank you both...
Hugs to you both

Always, me

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-02-10 08:26 AM


Your words express the mourning of the heart.Healing lies in this expressed beauty.
My love and prayers are with you.
Eric

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5 posted 2003-02-10 08:31 AM


Your grieving words were sung as softly as the cooing of a mourning dove.

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

GG
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6 posted 2003-02-10 09:00 AM


Eric,
Yes, I'm afraid I understand the hearts mourning well, as all too many do. Though there are many phases... Thank you much.

Earth Angel,
I'm glad you believe so ..though I find it strange.. I've been up two days and two nights now and when I wrote this. Maybe I can lull myself to sleep. Thanks you much.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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