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shannon harter
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0 posted 2003-02-09 01:48 AM



                "Do you fly"

do you cry
over me
your loss upon loses thrust into the nightly black sea?

do you lie, up at night, thinking of wrongs,to change them right?

or do you fly
far away

hoping to miss the penance

hoping to miss each passing day

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-02-09 01:49 AM


good question...
majnu
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2 posted 2003-02-09 01:57 AM


more ike an indictment.
nice bit.

-majnu
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-02-09 10:05 AM


sometimes we wallow
sometimes we fly
often we
are simply
asleep

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-02-09 06:16 PM


Beautiful poem.
Eric

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2003-02-09 06:17 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2003-02-09 09:57 PM


Flying is for birds..and angels..and if God wanted me to fly I'd be one of those!! LOL I'm afraid of heights....but I like your poem!
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